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| une see 2006-11-25 ch 2,  | abuseHm. Interesting... |
| Theif of the Sand 2006-08-12 ch 2, | abuseThis is a great story, I can't wait for the next chapter. (If you ever get to it.) Either way... This story has suspense so keep the story flowing along. -Theif of the Sand |
| Statik 2006-08-07 ch 2, | abuseHmm, I saw that you said you might remove this story. I just had to know why. I see no reason to remove it, even if you have major writer's block I would wait years just for an update on this story. I really do hope you continue to go on with this one because it is amazing. Wonderful writing and job well done. |
| Dolphingirl32173 2006-07-11 ch 2, | abuseSarah: ME WUV! UPDATE! |
| moodiful819 2006-06-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseIt's so deep. It really got me thinking. Plz continue it. |
| warmfuzzies 2006-06-24 ch 2, | abuseI like the whole techniques of phrases in brackets and repeating certain ideas (humid but not quite hot; sky cloudy and somehow smug)that lend a lot of depth and a almost poetic flow to the story. In other words, this story seriously rocks. =) |
| Silent Kunoichi aka. Fiona 2006-06-13 ch 2, | abusePAMS(Please add more soon) |
| Arianna B. 2006-06-11 ch 2, | abuseI'm on a reviewing spree, aren't I? Yeah, well... what can I say about this story? Only that is one of the BEST Kaka/Saku I have ever read. I love this story, and I can't wait for it to continue. And I can't critique your writing, because really... what is there to critique? This story may be one of the best I've read, and you are one of the best authors I've seen. Keep it up! |
| Zenna 2006-06-10 ch 2, anon. | abusethis story is teh love. you've hit sakura dead on with her intelligent but drifting thoughts and curiousity and unsure-ed-ness... that's not a word. sorry. and kakashi! he is perfect! you've definitly captured his difficult persona of mysteriousness and evasion, but you've still managed to make him interesting and god but he says just the right things. i also love that i can really feel the story and their relationship progressing. please keep going strong with this story. i can see that it has great potential to be one of the best kakashi/sakura fics EVER. |
| CloeyMarie 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseWell I have lots of nice things to say so I assume that it's alright to comment. I like your repition of phrases, I haven't seen that done before so it made for a more intersting reading experiance. I like the concept you have behind this and I can't wait to see where you take this. Also all the charectors were in charector not to mention no spelling mistakes that I could spot, I give it two thumbs up, so please continue! -Cloey Marie- |
| Neon Genesis 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abusesweet. i'm not really what you would call "for" kakashi/sakura, seeing as how i'm a shameless saku/sasu fangirl. hear me? SHAMELESS. but, i still know a good story when i see one. and, my frined, THIS is one. update soon! or goddammit, i'll send rabid sasuke fangirls after you! (and no, i'm not talking about me) UPDATE SOON! Keely |