Reviews for This Side Down

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Six-string Samurai 2007-10-31 ch 13,	abuseThis was a pleasant little diversion from real life. I'd be great to see another chapter but I can see where you started to taper off. No worries, it was good while it lasted.
Master Chaos 2005-01-23 ch 13,	abuse...um hi This is a really really really good story. and I was wondering...if you could continue this story. ::bows and claps hands:: Onegai Onegai Onegai! :stands up: Its a really interesting idea you have here. It'll be a shame to end it here.I'm sorry to hear that you are losing intrest in your own wonderful work. But If you don't want to continue I'll respect your decision. Its your work. You do with it what you want. ::sighs: anyway as I say for everyone else You are the author. Its your work. Ignore the fools who diss your work. Only listen to said fools when they give you suggestions that you like and accept to better improve your work then it already is. This is Master Chaos. I'll see you in the shadows. :bows respectively: ARigauto GOzimasu Tail Kinker-san
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 13,	abuseTenchi has a flat top not a buzz cut. I like the changes Genma has made in Tenchi. He's got a spine! grin Nice work.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 12,	abuse"And she's a two-fisted drinker. You'd probably like her." I've never heard of a Ryoko Soun pairing. Hm. You know it wouldn't be that hard to pull off. LOL. Ayeka working for McDonalds. A little character development slipped in there. grin Great chapter.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 11,	abuseAyeka jealous of Sasami? blink That was surprising. Nice scene with Nabiki. Very touching. I like the work you have done on Ryoga and Nabiki. It's nice to have more then one possible couple to keep an eye on. Most people concentrate on the one and the others are more of an after thought with no alternate plans.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 10,	abuseHe was puzzled by the formality...but she was offering food. grin Genma's training!
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 9,	abuseYosho grew up on Jurai it's doubtful he would have Terran morals. His father and teachers would see to his learning Jurian morals quite well. His grandfather is half-human, and all his other ancestors were fully human... with the possible exception of Genma." Hehehehe! Good explanation for Yosho's actions. Very in character.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 8,	abuseInteresting twist. What was the message Tenchi received? Washu? You have to love Sasami. She rarely plays pranks but when she does . . . grin
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 7,	abuseThat is the first time I have heard a decent explanation for why Ryoko was attacking him. Did you buff up Akane? She shouldn't have done that well against Ryoko. I would guess it was just surprise. I was hoping for Ryoko to give her a little payback. grin Why would Funaho send out the message? Yosho did talk to her frequently and had no doubt mentioned why he had allowed her to be freed by Tenchi. I would think that attracting Jurian attention would be a bad idea at that point.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 6,	abuseWhen is Ryoko showing up? Shouldn't she have shown up already? He's been there for a while after all. wince Poor Ryoga. Well at least Ryoga and Nabiki have a common goal. She turned out to be a bit more evil then I thought she would be. LOL. I guess Ryoga isn't that different after all. I can't believe Kasumi nailed him like that! I assume the end bit is Ryoko? grin
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 5,	abuseThe girls are even more hostile then I thought they would be. I figured it would take at least a couple of months before they got that involved with him. grin I like the changes you've made with Ryoga. He always did make a good friend. I was surprised by the comment abought hand size. At first I thought Kasumi was making a rather risqué comment. grin I know it's foreshadowing for something but what I don't know.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 4,	abuseHehehe. Ranma could escape the fiancées fighting over him at times by hiding out at the Tendo's. Tenchi doesn't have that option. grin
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 3,	abusechuckle Sasuke is well trained. I see you are keeping the mandatory beatings in the story. grin The pantie comment seems OOC, both in the anime and here! grin
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 2,	abusechuckle Akane is definitely in character. Nicely done. Shows her faults without over doing it.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-22 ch 1,	abusePromising start. I didn't expect to see Ranma replaced by Tenchi altogether. Seems to be working tho'.

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