Reviews for Birth of the Hidden Harbor Ninjas

Aliaandraa 2006-06-05 ch 1,	abuseHey, hey. It seems umm interesting... yeah, interesting. It's a bit confusing though... but that's just me. It should make sense for most people though. =)
Suzerain 2006-06-02 ch 1,	abuseYo! Heh, we see part of their past eh? OC's aren't that bad. Your 2 seem quite amicable. I liked em after that brief intro in the last chapter of Survival Skills. This is like a bonus for me. I'm looking forward to the new chapters. (of this and the other one, heh, heh, heh)
drunkdragon 2006-06-01 ch 1,	abuseNot bad. I'm not sure if you simply forgot or not, but some words were missing. Hmm... You could have used a line to seperate scenes between the two families. I got a bit confused when it turned from the Yukihana to Mu clan. Also, there wasn't much description about the surroundings. Although it probably wasn't necessary, it would add some color to your chapter. Good luck with part two!