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SaJi
2008-05-14 . chapter 2
Woot! Another lovely story of DOOM! Although...I am so wanting to know how they escape the piranhas-beavers and army of pygmy warriors now. o3o;
Obsessed Pam
2008-02-28 . chapter 2
What a memorable story! I'm not such a great fan of flashbacks, but this was handled very well. It is certainly in a class of its own in so many ways, characterisation, dialogue - oh that dialogue. Rodney's snark was a pleasure to behold.

How on earth I missed this story is beyond me, but the Stargate awards have rectified my ommission. Thank heaven - you're already a winner in my books.
Trishkafibble
2006-12-30 . chapter 2
I LOVE YOU. Don't ever stop writing--I love your dialogue, I love your characterizations, I LOVE your endings, I love your exquisite balance of angst and attitude and tension and tenderness, and your awesome comedic talents--if all fic writers were this good, my children would starve and my husband would leave me. And I'd never notice.

...Yeah, sorry--I really should wait for the riverfic high to disperse before writing these things, shouldn't I... ^^ Uhm, good job. Nice work. I laughed a lot. Bye. *eyeroll* XD
krysalys
2006-12-18 . chapter 2
*snicker*
...
Poke poke poke.
"All. Your. Fault."
"McKay, willya QUIT it?! Jeeze!"
...
*snorfle*
-}-@
Alipeeps
2006-11-23 . chapter 2
I love this story. It was well-written (the only teeny mistake I noticed was repelled instead of rappelled near the end of chapter 2) and utterly absorbing. Great plot idea for the Victavan's customs and the action was very well-described. I also enjoyed the structure - how you cut back and forth between the action in the present and the flashbacks to explain how they got into that situation. Lovely whumpage, great humour and an excellent depiction of the team's relationship. Thanks.
WriterJC
2006-08-19 . chapter 2
Fantastic. Loved it bunches.
Beth Green
2006-08-09 . chapter 2
Howdy!

My momma raised me to say 'Thank you' when I receive a gift, and your stories certainly qualify. I'm sorry I haven't really sent feedback before now; I've been too busy reading! So, please accept this virtual basketful of warm fuzzies, one for each and every story that you've posted.

When I first discovered SGA and the wonderfulness of all things Rodney three months ago, I was very pleased to find hundreds of quality stories awaiting my reading pleasure. Since May, I've been following story recs to try to avoid the lesser quality stories. Just so you know, you're on more than one person's list as being a favorite author.

Anyway, there's still a lot of stories I haven't read. I mention this because I've actually reread more than one of your stories. Reading your fic is like viewing my favorite episodes - worth a second look.

I love your characterizations of John as well as Rodney. You've got Rodney's snark-asm down perfectly. (And yes, I've read some of the Likethekoscha stories, too; again, sorry for not sending feedback. Although I'll read Rodney with anyone, anywhere, when I read your Geeks & Goons stories you manage to convince me that John & Rodney are the OTP.)

Your story, The Tomb, is another example of your fine stories: clever plotting, nifty dialogue, great characterizations, and best of all, whumping!

Thanks so much for sharing, and keep on writing!
Tazmy
2006-07-06 . chapter 2
finally finished this. Iloved it!
berlinghoff
2006-06-13 . chapter 1
Great fic! Yeah, what else is new?! I loove how you write the boys and their posse. Could you please apply for a job as a writer on the show? Please?
Laura-trekkie
2006-06-11 . chapter 2
Great ending. You kept the tension high as first they had to deal with the box, then get off the planet and then wait for John to come round. Excellent job with Rodney's voice throughout- just the right mix of panic, concern, snark and happiness.

I loved that they went straight back out into another situation. It couldn't have been any other way really *g*.
Ellex
2006-06-05 . chapter 2
Another wonderful story! I love the beaver/pirhana's at the end of the story, and the light bulb jokes.
mtee1958
2006-06-05 . chapter 2
I loved the ending. That was a different way of finishing the story. Great job.
angw
2006-06-05 . chapter 2
Thank you thank you thank you thank you for this fabulous fic. I haven't laughed so hard or loud in a while.

This is just too good for words. From Rodney's scathing comments - sorry I was rejected from the afterlife...the name of his kids - Ronon's ever present shoot everything fetish (and the survival on bugs), Sheppard's observations and Teyla's despair at being lumped with boys (especially when they discussed the sex comfort card). There's just so many more moments...

An absolute joy to read. Thanks again.
Porthos1013
2006-06-04 . chapter 2
How the hell you can have me not only chuckling, but downright cackling like a loon while witnessing the firy and/or furry-fished demise of m'boys just astounds me. Yes, I cackle, what of it?

Seriously, I'm sure you get told this in amounts that don't even have names yet, but you are an extremely talented writer, and I absolutely love reading anything written by you. You could make the ingredients listed on a box of bran flakes sound interesting! Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us. :D
kodiak
2006-06-04 . chapter 2
OMG, River, this was funny and gross (dead bodies *shudder*...and cuddling up with dead bodies *shudder*)! I hope you have a good trip and then come back ready to get working in your next romp for the boys!
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