I like this its really good. Great job and please update soon!

love

that was interesting but why would you make it seem like lash was so upset about losing to a girl that is totally sexist. girls are just as good as guys i love the story anyway.

It's a great story so far, but Lash and Speed were seniors. Keep up the good work.

:]] i know that song from DDR. yes.

gahh. speed is such a fatty. i love him.

oh god i hate when people surprise you like lash did when he was leaning against the door. seriously, if someone does that to me, i scream and fall down. well, i do that a lot. hah. but still!

woww, she- err, you, since you wrote it- knows so much about music... it makes me giddy :]

YES. DDR battle. i would lose, but it would still be FUN.

:]] i really like this girl. she is the shizz. i would be like her. i swear i would!

:D i would get all stalkery on lash. coz i lovehim so much gahH!

oomgg

i just love her.

the tea and crumpets bit?

i so would have said that.

she is just great

go you!

wrarr sometimes coach boomer makes me so mad :[[

ahh fruitcups! yay!

:] i like her. i would make fun of warren, lash, and speed, by giving them funny nicknames like 'mr. entuisastic' 'sir lash' and 'squire speed' too.

Warren does need a girlfriend. not me coz i dont likehim. but really. it would lighten him up a bunch.

omg.

theyare so cute together! :D iloveyou for putting them together.

LOL even tho the story WAS lashOC. they are really cute together. goodjob

YAY! AWSOME! thats it...I'm totally watching this story...

awsome chapter! can't wait for the next

D:: i've been trying so hard to find a black and white striped shirt. :D and i know some kanji

but she sure does wear a lot of black

wow, Lash, Speed, and Penny are sophomores[supposed to be juniors] in your story? hm... come to think of it, all of a sudden i cant remember anywhere in the movie where it says they're seniors. unless its at the beginning where they as for a 15 dollar freshman fee thing.

sir lash and squire speed... that made me smile and chuckle :D

yay! i like sum41.

:]] its good. i likes it

wow... you use the word pristine alot...

but its basically good :] and cute

The whole "Miss Ame" and "Sirs Lash and Speed" just enders me to this story and I need more of it... you should update.

i like it.

great story, cant wait for an update

update i lurve it its wonderful.