Reviews for Encounter in Venice

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christi 2008-06-18 ch 6, anon.	abusei absolutely love this story! the old version when i read it was kind of confusing cause it kept switching from different peoples pt of views. and also ive never seen a case closed and sailor moon crossover. actually i dont think there really are crossovers with case closed. when are we gonna see shiho and seiya cause i loved that they were a couple. also, could i be able to read the old version some way?
SN 1987A 2007-04-07 ch 5,	abuseI finally have time to read and review! =D I love the dialogue, the narration... Actually, I don't really know what to say except that it's awesome, and I can't wait for the next chapter. (I wish I could say something more constructive... =P) Oh I thought of something. I think the best part of the new version is that you decided to take some time to examine the relationship between Shinichi and Ran (and other people) ever since the incident. Before, it was just kind of glossed over. I like it. =)
sweet-ghyny13 2007-04-04 ch 5,	abuseHey, this is - I think - my first time reading your story. I think it's good by far. So, Heiji died and Shiho left? I think the latter will actually happen in the real manga, seeing as Shiho was never comfortable in the group anyways. Normally, people would write about Shinichi and Ran having a happy ending, but this is better. (I've never been a happy-ending fan). I really want to see whether the woman is Shiho or not. So, Shiho lied when she called the professor, right? She told him that she saw him during the break, but he never did see her. Well, at least not until before the third act. Plus, kudos for the sailor moon crossover. I'm not much of a fan, but I like diversity in characters. And it's better than making original characters xD. So, keep on updating please? I'll be waiting, ciao ciao
KristiexxNguyen 2007-04-03 ch 5,	abuseYay! You're alive! I feel horrible for not keeping in contact in anyway. =/ Been straying from the fanfiction world. sigh I've been rewatching Sailor Moon lately. XD You didn't kill Haruka off, did you?! You definitely need to send me your old version one day! I love your portrayel of Shinichi (I think I've said that before). Looking forward to the next chapter as always!
Hiyono-chin 2006-07-21 ch 4,	abuseYay~! He finally saw her! Fufufufu...
Hiyono-chin 2006-07-21 ch 3,	abuseo__O; So that wasn't Ai back then? shakes head Anyway, grammar mistake in the part where the professor was asking "Ai" if she would like to see Shinichi and Ran in Venice. "I almost forgot to tell you, Shinichi-kun and Ran-kun are in Venice at the moment. Would you like to meet them? [They going] to stay in Venice for about a week." I think you have forgotten to put "are" b/w they and going. ;)
Astarael00 2006-07-17 ch 4,	abuse"The audience have"...grimaces rescues the OED from the fire so she can personally rip it apart Great chapter other than that, especially because Ai finally shows up. And the plot gets rolling, and everyone's in character, and...XD awaits the next chapter
KristiexxNguyen 2006-07-17 ch 4,	abuseIntriguing as always ^^ From the way Shinichi acts now, I swear he's going to have a heart attack when he sees Ai again XD I'm really enjoying this story. Such a pity that I never read the old one =/ Looking forward to when they'll meet - and everything else that comes with it. =)
Fredryck 2006-07-17 ch 4,	abuseWow, this story becomes more intriguing each chapter! It's all so mysterious, I wonder what happened between Shinichi and Ai that made her go away...anyway, it looks like as it's Shinichi's fault, as he's full of regret about it. I like how you managed to keep Shinichi IC, but at the same time more mature, because the years as Conan have changed him. Finally, all the things you said about the Italians are absolutely true! Even my bus is always late... :D
SN 1987A 2006-07-16 ch 4,	abuseInteresting additional scene at the beginning. I wonder who the person with the champagne glass is. My wild (very wild) guess is that he's Mamoru. Don't ask why. He probably will turn out to be someone I didn't guess. Ah, I think I know the significance of taking away the gong at La Fenice. Without it, people will hardly notice the wrong time on clocks. I think. Very nice chapter. Though I did run off in the middle because my piano arrived. (That is one thing that'll knock me off my seat...)
Fredryck 2006-07-15 ch 3,	abuseHi there! Whoa...how could I not notice this fic until now! I remember that there was another version of this story, but I never had the chance to read it. Well, I guess it's better this way, so that I can fully enjoy the new version. So far I'm quite intrigued by the plot; I wonder what happened to Ai after taking the antidote (if she took it). I was quite shocked after Shinichi pretended to be Ai to confort poor Agase; I didn't see it coming...anyway, I hope you're still working on this, it's such a good story that it would be a shame if you left it unfinished. And I love the Shinichi/Shiho pairing, so please UPDATE! Added to favorites.
SN 1987A 2006-07-05 ch 3,	abuseAh yes, I think I know who the young woman is at the end of this chapter. At first I was a bit confused, but when I read the paragraph a second time, I remembered the person with the same haircut as Ai. (coughNadiacough) The conversation between "Ai" and Agasa has lengthened. I wonder if the Ming Dynasty vases will come into play later on in the story. But it might simply be Agasa's wish to be with Ai. I wonder what was Shinichi's thoughts when he heard Agasa say that Shinichi seems to miss Ai... Definitely short chapter. (pats FS) You've written something short. XD But this is definitely not long enough for three pages... Unless you use a different font from what I use. :)
Astarael00 2006-07-05 ch 3,	abuseAh, you posted. Good. scrolls through casually finds title; looks amused I still think it looks odd, but then I can't think of anything better...except maybe to use single quotes around the title when Haibara's talking. glances at author's note You give me too much credit, I think. "Such speed" comes from ignoring things I really should be doing. XD
KristiexxNguyen 2006-07-05 ch 3,	abuseI never got the chance to read your old encounter, so I'm practically at the edge of my seat. XD I love the way you write - very professional. Are the books going to spell out the title of the story? Well, until your next chapter (wish I could've read your old version).
Southpaw 2006-07-05 ch 2,	abuseI just wanted to let you know how much more I'm enjoying this version that the other one. you've given me far more digestible chunks of the story, and the flow and paragraph length also feel a lot better. I had actually given up a long time ago on the other one, because it had been so frustrating. it's still a little confusing to have the verbs in present tense, but I think I can get around it with a little more exposure. congrats on the revisions!

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