that was one of thy best storys i have ever read i hope you keep this story line going its just strting to get good keep up with the good work pieace

I loved this story! hope you make a continuation

Excellent story. Again another action/romantic/comedy. Lots happening here and they're all good topics. Don't want to spoil it for the rest of the readers. Keep up the good work

Ok,..I don't quite understand the title but great story.

Sorry for that review that was accidentally sent. He's what its suppose to say:

Oh my god! What a chapter. I was stunned, glad, **, and sad all at the same time.

Stunned : At the drama and outrage that happened at dinner.

Glad : That Ron not only stuck up for his fiancé and told that jaundiced, cruel, cold hearted, judgmental, not-good-for-nothing, selfish, **-like, (I would say B*tch but she's acting like an **), great-aunt of his a piece and I mean a piece, of his mind ( I would have torn her up!) but also comforted his lover, his wife, his Kim, when she needed it. Also, Gram was spankin'!

**: At what that Great-Queen of The B*tches said to Kim and to Ron!

Sad : At what Kim must have been feeling after hearing that old bitter woman's heart spill out of hatred and moe about what Ron must have been feeling having someone, his own Great-Aunt, his own family, talk about not only his lover, but his lifetime partner in that matter just because she's not Jewish. So prejudiced!

Anyway, the Wicked Witch of Boca is leaving to go back to her home to eat eye of newt and won't have to worry about her Great-Nephew marrying a gentile for a while(or more importantly worry about Kim for that matter).

No, but really great chapter. Kim and Ron can now rest easily, until confronting Ron's(their)parent about the incident cause one of them is likely to bring it up. Anyways, nice way to end the quarrel between the 3. Great job Nel...Commander Argus.

Oh my god! What a chapter. I was stunned, glad, **, and sad all at the same time. Stunned: The drama and rage at what was happening during dinner. I

What Anne said to Kim was right. That she hurt Ron as much as Carrion hurt her and she NEEDS to know that. Kim may be eighteen but she sure wasn't acting her age. She needs to know that its her actions that make her an adult, not the number of her age.

As for Ron, teach that S-O-B Carrion a lesson he'll never forget and end this!

Eagerly awaiting more!

OH...MY...GOD! I NEW IT! I NEW HE WAS CARRION! I COULD SENSE IT! THAT LITTLE S-O-B! Lord, Kim and Ron need a miracle. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter.

Could this possibly be the dream Ron had before they graduated in June? Where Kim and him broke up and it was indeed his fault? I fear for their relationship.

I so saw this coming when I read the last chapter. I am shaking in my seat right now. I don't know why? To think, just a few days ago Kim was talking about having kids with Ron, now both the promise and more importantly the ENGAGEMENT ring is off! I now Ron thought he was doing the right this not to tell Kim, but its best to tell her right upfront and deal with the hurt then than have her think he's safely locked up in a state prison and find out later the S-O-B who got her drunk, threatened her physically and sexually, was her kidnapper last summer. I am so afraid for what's gonna happen next. I fear for both Kim and Ron. This sitch has to work out. It just has to!

Eagerly awaiting more!

Oh God. Please tell me this Goth person isn't Cary. Please tell me he hasn't returned. But Wade said he didn't have any records of being arrested? Then again he did go straight to the hospital, not to jail... Please don't be Cary. Please. PLEASE Don't Be Cary!

Wow. This Goth guy is really starting to creep me out. Like Cary On or Carrion did in "Our Place in the Food Chain". I hope its not going to be another sitch like that. Those things scare me.

Oh! No! Barkin returns from MHS!

HAHAHAHAHA I love this chapter. "If not…it’s a one way ride to the swamp.” “Black swamp deep?” Ron asked. “Exactly.”

What a perfect Possible conversation with Ron.

Keep writing,

Gerald
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pepe the mutant chihuahua! lol!