Reviews for So lovely was the loneliness

Evenstar Elanor 2006-06-25 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I like some of the concepts and themes you bring forth and it's nicely thought out. The language is what bothers me though. Your descriptions are utterly stunning and beautiful. I love all of them from the beginning "He walked barefoot in the sand, shoes dangling from his hands, and the waves destroyed any trace of him ever passing this way." to the end with the river and her body. But I didn't like the dialogues. The theme in it was great and what you got through was great as well, but they didn't sound.. elven at all. They didn't even sound like very sophisticated humans, which given their "age" and experiences, they should be. Especially the fact that they refer to themselves as "Elves", which Elves seldom do. Alright now I'm just being nitpicky, sorry. I think your dialogues sounded too colloquial and every day, and they sort of take away from the profound messages you send. Nice job though.
Eriala 2006-06-21 ch 1,	abusejust - beautiful. abselutely beautiful. that's all i can say, really. *feta
Vana Tuivana 2006-06-07 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful. I like the dialogue very much. I'm wondering who the woman was, though -- my first thought was Idril, and then I wondered where I got that from... ;-P Anyway, lovely writing! I did enjoy it.