i like the first one better, but the mane lines of the story are what i really like

(he would have an excuse to keep her alive)
(she would have an excuse to save him)

this two lines are waht make this story so strong
and well your talent is what make this soo good nn

'You're breaking me.'

'I know.'

'Thanks.'

'For what?'

'For doing it gently.'

Oh..my..God. Chilling, heartbreaking, Sakura, still so twistedly wrapped up in her first love, her only love, the only person she wants to pretend nevereverever changed but still, even when its so clear he's a killer and a monster, she can't stop forgiving him, and she can't stop loving him.
This was beyond beautiful. One of the best things I've read in a long time.
'Get up Sakura.'
'I /can't./'

Even in everything he still can't get her out of his head, and she can't stop taking him in, blood in all.
Beyond Gorgeous.
Beyond Heartbreaking.

You've made my day.
:)
Miss Aerith

Damn that was raw. The second chapter was WAY better. I think that the raw emotion is appealling to an audience. Especially Sakura's emotions and inner turmoil with Sasuke. You pose a realistic situation for the manga. Sasuke is ruthless, but when it comes to his friends, he is compassionate. Sakura, on the other hand is very compassionate and emotional and what some people say in the manga is that she is so emotional that it conflicts with her shinobi duty.

It's very beautifully written and it makes you think about Sakura's development and her devotion to Sasuke.

Prettyful story!

Wow. Just...wow.

I absolutely adored this story, and it makes me itch for a sequel, but I would think that would diminish the entire emotion of the story.

This story literally pulled out my heartstrings. You wrote this bittersweet so well.

I have no comments to provide you with how you could improve something, so this, of course, goes straight to my favorites list.

Again, an absolutely wonderful job.

aw..i LOVED the last line. it was soo sweet.

reallyreallyreally GOOD!!

Oh my gosh. Wow. Didn't see that reasoning coming!

eh-it works

Angsty. Kind of happy at the end?

I really like this, uhm.. twoshot? lol Very well done!

Awesome!

Lovin it

Confuzzled239

Sarah: what the hell?! BOTH chapters were freaking me out ... that almost never happens! my word, kiddo, you're damned good at making me experience things through your stories that very, VERY few other stories make me experience. your a good author. you should try going pro and getting an original novel published. if you do, e-mail me the name of the novel and your writer name so i can get it, okay? later.

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this ^^
I'm sorry it took me awhile, but I was meaning to tell you how much I liked the ideas in this twoshot.
'He would have an excuse to keep her alive', 'She would have an excuse to save him'.
Brilliant, really. I'd never have come to that conclusion myself, that's for sure, but you really remind me how much I used to like this couple. *shakes fist in author's direction*
I thought that the first chapter actually flowed better, but personally I like the second chapter much more. It's just as well-written, if not better, and you got to showcase your talent better with absolutely awesome oneliners.
'...and she couldn’t handle the fact, as the rain bathed her body in regrets and Sakura knew she wasn't made to smile, that maybe she was deluding herself.'
One more thing.
"You're breaking me."
"Thank you," "For what?"
"Doing it gently."
^^ That must be my favourite SasuSaku quote of all time. Wonderful job, seriously :)

i like how u swictched for sasuke to sakura. but i like chapter 2 better a lot better. mabey when my fanfic is put on here u will like mine!