Well written and wonderful.

Kawaii~! LuNa is such a cute pairing. It's kind of different then HieiBotan ne? Great job!

ah! this was so cute! I really liked it. so sweet!

luffy and nami are a gr8 couple. i like the story it was cute

I'm not to fancie with the pairing, but that's alright, since it was well-done and kinda cute! so I liked it!