Interesting.

But didn't Ansem the Wise only have 6 apprentices? Nonetheless, an amusing piece to read :)

MS

AWESOME!

LOved it

I lol'd, yo. I think you could work on descriptions or combine some chapters, because they were pretty short (long chapters are superior).

^_^ nice!

HEY WHO SAYS RUDE ISN'T STRONG ENOUGH TO BECOME A HUMANOID NOBODY! MEANIE! lol

I could not see Reno..I mean Axel..Just popping up knowing his new name and saying got it memorized lmao. Xemnas had to give them their new names lol. But whatever. No fanish nitpicks from me ^_^

Hey did Elena become Larxene? I always thought she was...I mean Larxene ..if you take the X out..it makes Elena...

Anywho!

Nicely done...

Man I'm getting thrown for loops lol.

Quick nitpick.

Um...the others are already in the organization? Or no?

^_^

Reno is always one to ** someone off lol.

Loving this.

Demy? Haha that's too easy. I'll say something like Meyd or..Yemd O.o...or ..I dunno but not Demy lol ^_^

Loving this..

Rikku, Yuna, and Paine. LMAO. Nice filler chapter.

I wouldn't be suprised if this is how Reno's downfall takes place resulting in him becoming Axel who!! ^_^

Good action ^_^

Haha Chapter Two is hilarious! That damn cow cracked me up!

Seems very promising! Very!

o.o

X'D 50 on sephy!