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| Ghostwriter 2008-10-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, I don't know. I think Dean woulda protected Sam with his body. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| V.R. Jennings 2008-09-30 ch 1, | abuseGood story. Keep up the good work! :) |
| pringle.sam 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseMaybe I'm just really emotional right now, but there are tears in my eyes and goosebumps on my arms. And I'm kind of mad at you. Because the poem seems totally different when it's just Sammy. And I'm thinking that I don't really like you. But you write very well. Do you write happy? |
| casus17 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abusei loved this story, i had to go back and read it again. and again. that poem was beautiful, and it suited the story so well. i loved the ending, with Dean saving Sam, an dhow you never actually said that Dean was dead, you kind of just let it sink in. beautiful. casus17 |
| Jet 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseSomehow I missed the character death warning at the begining of this...just skipped right over it. So it hit me alot harder than I was expecting in the end. (I really should have seen it coming I suppose). Great story here, I love your style, the way you mix memories into realtime and it flows. And this: >Sam’s eyes said I’m going to kill you, you bastard and Sam’s dreams said, so come and get me then, boy – and it was all Dean could do not to grab his little brother and pull him back from the fight instead of following him into it.< I can't even begin to explain all the emotions this dreged up for me. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! |
| Jayme 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It's really good |
| Regretful 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI'm stunned, that was so beautiful and tragic. 'Oh, Sammy, he didn't die he's in the wind and the snow and the rain!' I was shouting to anyone who would listen...simply stunning. |
| NinaZ 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseomg! so sad! but well-written...loved it. |
| SpikeLover7 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAw, so sad, but so good. I've always loved that poem, and you put it to great use. First thing I thought of when I read the title, too. Great job! :) |
| Lilly B. 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abusethat was excellent! |
| Kristen-Potter 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abusewhoa! like jaw dropper, wonderfully done! You kept in character, brought back memories, incorporated everything so well, very impressed indeed. You did good! Props to you |
| fairytalemanipulator 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abuseOh my god. *sniffle* |
| Isobel Swan 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseSniff, sniff. |
| M.Kena 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseAw. That was incredible. I just hope to God that's not how the show goes. I love Deano too much. Maybe almost like that... just no dying. Anyway, that was incredible. Into my favorites it goes. |
| stealthyone 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, oh, oh ... this hurt. *sob* And yet, I can see things playing out this way, because let's face it, Sam and Dean's lifestyle doesn't lend itself to living until they're old and grey. Very nicely written. Thanks for a great read. |