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| Raine Ishida 2008-06-26 ch 6,  | abuseWell, it's been almost a year since you've updated this. Rest assured that when you do update it next, I will be there to read it. :) |
| Tiefling Zhai 2008-02-17 ch 6, | abuseSo, what if the cops find her banging this clone kid in the back seat? Yuck! I think she's just in it for the danger. Some women like poisonous relationships. |
| Tiefling Zhai 2008-02-17 ch 5, | abuseNothing like a Shakespeare reference. |
| Tiefling Zhai 2008-02-17 ch 3, | abuse"I wasn’t kid-napped." Was that intentional? Cuz it's like, a clone of the uber bad guy, right? But his kid version? Sorta like Mini Me? |
| Tiefling Zhai 2008-02-17 ch 2, | abuseOK, so ... the guy mommy doesn't approve of is some sort of mutated man boy? Hmm ... |
| Tiefling Zhai 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseNo idea what is going on, but I get the basics. A protective mommy, an unsavory guy and a strong friend ... |
| Magyk 2007-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it! Its dark. Nice! CYBERSIX ROX! |
| Guess who? :P 2007-09-12 ch 6, anon. | abusePhew! It's gettin' hot in here! (Someone likes to write about teh sexy!) But on another note, things are looking a lot darker. Jacinta seems to be in danger of changing, and not in a good way. |
| Gen the Lurker 2006-08-25 ch 5, anon. | abuse*ahem* OKAY PEOPLE, START COMMENTING ALREADY!! Seriously, your other stuff has like a million more comments than mine ever got, let's see some REVIEWS here! Other than that, it's going to be hard to wait for the next installment until you've come back from Japan but somehow I'll have to do it! :) |
| Gen the Lurker 2006-08-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh!! A Rewrite - how exciting! Of course I was quite the Squealy McSquealerton to have seen the bit about my veryest own character - made my day! I really really love the dialogue between Jose and Jacinta. I always have. It flows and it's believable. But I still wonder what would happen if they were actually able to have a baby...but it ended up a girl. *pondering* |