   Asugar 7/14/08 . chapter 1Great job. The Lorne/Sheppard boss/second-in-command interaction is very nicely done. |
| KariHermione 8/7/07 . chapter 1 poor lorne! *cries* |
| Ditzyleo 1/29/07 . chapter 1 *hugs lorne, cries; then hugs john*
Nice *sniff* |
| NenyaVilyaNenya 6/3/06 . chapter 1 oh crap *hugs Lorne*
liked the snippity imagery of him trying to remember what happened. |
| Elizabeth Bartlett 6/3/06 . chapter 1 poor Lorne. good story though. |
| Reefgirl 6/3/06 . chapter 1 Very good, I really enjoyed this, Is there going to be anymore? |
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