Nice story. I liked it. I actually felt sorry for Aeka.

We, she does kinda 'live' for Tenchi, ne? ::chuckles smirking:: Nope, you won't ever live that one down. _ It's a good little story regardless hun! _

Keep writing!

that was TOTALLY CUTE!
i totally love this fanfic... totally love the way u made ayeka looked it was so funny.

I already read this, whoops and reviewed, well I'm weird. ;;, sorry.

This is a cute story and it's a multi-chapter one. That's cool, it's really nice. Good job on it.

Well, it's been done before, but I got in to it.

It's okay... but you definately indulged way too much into the old "Ayeka's a bitch" stereotype. Study a good Ayeka/Tenchi fic once in a while. You'll learn that, although she is mean sometimes, she isn't that bad at all. I myself am a T/R fan, so you can probably take what I'm saying as truth.

nice fic i think ryoko's last name is hakiby or hakibu

Okay. Now that I've read the whole thing, I can see why you got rid of Aeka. It really is a cute story. There's very little chance it could have been so with her still around.

Personally, I'm don't really like fics where one of the characters gets bashed, especially when it's Tenchi doing the bashing.

However, I have read some of the other reviews, and I'm willing to read the rest of the story based on that.

This is a great beggining. I'm going to read more! Keep up the good work! I think you did an excellent job!

luv luv luved it! & thanz 4 leavin Ayeka out 4 good!

O YEA! let the bitch have it then give it to her straight haha! itz perfect!

ohhhh that was perfect!

Nice ending... I hope you do have a sequel to it and happy belated birthday!