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| blisblop 2007-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseBrilliant! |
| blisblop 2006-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseGod! This is just awe inspiring.So beautifil and melencoly.Yes.Truely a work of art.I can't get over it.I am pulled back time and again. |
| Kohaku Kawa 2006-09-12 ch 1,  | abuseNO! Orochimaru-sama is dead! but that last one was really sexy, they all were really. It saddens me that there aren't more. |
| blisblop 2006-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeyond wicked cool.I have no words.Strong work this. |
| helium lost 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI'd seen this finished over at 30_kisses a while ago, but I never got around to finish reading/reviewing it. ^^; So here I am, out to finish the job :P I really like your writing style; it has this choppiness that works really well, and your descriptions are marvelous—they convey the tense feeling fantastically, and you can *see* their actions, *see* how they feel and sink yourself into it. You have some grammatical errors here and there (mostly punctuation and capitalization), but they don't really interfere with the prose :D I love love *love* the ending, the anger and passion in it, the smooth way everything flows together... Again, I really like your writing style; it's something I've been trying to achieve this whole time—those sort of surreal, detached scenes, described almost in breaths and whispers. I gave up on Naruto a couple years ago because it was getting too long and complex, but now that I've read this, I kind of feel like getting back into it. ^^; Lovely fic; good job portraying their relationship in all of its twisted glory :) - hl |
| blisblop 2006-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseUtterly amazing.I have never read but one good voice for this pairing(something about Sasuke screaming like the child he is.I can't find it anymore)but this is a symphany,thank you so much!I liked the milk one ,the last one,the bleeding eyes...jeez ,just so much.I wish you would do a full fic.maybe you have.Gotta go and check.Again,amazing.Oh,the mention of Suichi was a good shock. |
| JuliTina 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. Usually with the 30 themes each snippet is separate, but I loved the way all the themes in this story link together - leading to the end. Again, lovely writing style, but the end beats all the rest by far. You can feel Sasuke's surpressed rage in the last line, making this a very realistic OroSasu story. XD |
| viciouscallisto 2006-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuse** kick **. absolutely amazing. i love you. sasuke-kun and orochimaru-sama are dark and creepy, i loved it. good job with the fic, you are cool. |
| Tenshi-Battosai 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseM...such a magnificent story... I love the description in it...and written in such a way with themes and feelings... I loved it! ^_^ |
| Glinfaewyn 2006-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was an amazing story. The writing was clean and sharp, leaving me wanting more. I loved it. |
| Chibified Eyes 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseMm liked the style of writing, using little scenes to build up a deep story. Good stuff ^_^ |