 The Tainted Knight 2009-12-21 . chapter 20It is a rare occurrence when the bad guys win and the good guys lose. I loved how you actually portrayed Wesker as someone who is not just completely evil. I can't wait to see more work from you because you are a really good writer and maybe there might be a sequel to this story. |
 DamonWesker 2009-12-20 . chapter 20Oh that was beautiful. That was fucking brilliant! I just finnised your story and I loved it. And it ended the way I wanted it to end too, with Steve being with Wesker and Sherry. One big happy family, huh? Lol. I love it though. Hell I've always loved Wesker, to me there could be no life without him, not one I would choose anyway. Ya know, before reading this story I never thought much about Steve, even though I replayed Code Veronica recently, but I must say I like what you've done with him. Yep, I like it alot. He reminds me alot of my own OC. Well thats all I have to say, except, good job! |
 Gusty bv 2009-12-14 . chapter 17Wow, I didn't expect it to end so quickly after Chapter 19 xD; but I suppose all good things have to end sometime. I just though perhaps there'd be more interaction between Wesker and Steve then there was after Claire left. Ah well. Still I really enjoyed this story 83. Kinda hope maybe it has a sequel or something later on xD. |
 Claire Burnside267 2009-12-14 . chapter 20OMG! I feel like crying. This is the end! After so long, you're finally done with that story! I...have mixed feelings toward it though. I wasn't exactly expecting a happy ClairexSteve ending, knowing you, but...I feel bad for Claire. Well, I hated her in some parts and all, but...I won't say she deserved it, but it ended really harsh for her. And always, you make the bad guys look like good guys, which is something I appreciate. But the ClairexSteve fan in me is still crying.
Okay, fangirl apart, you overdid yourself with that story. It was always something to look forward to. So, thanks for keeping working on it and actually finishing it. I would have appreciated a little epilogue with the Redfields, but I know that it's not really necessary. Overall, I really enjoyed the story. I still keep reading certain chapters because they're just made of win (first fight scene and sex scene among others). I secretly hope that you'll keep writing RE-related stories, maybe shorter ones, but I doubt it. I just want you to know that I'll be there to read them if you ever go back to it.
Thanks again for that wonderful story. I hope you're proud of yourself.
-Marie xoxox
btw, I left a review for the previous chapter, but something went wrong since it's nowhere o__O |
 Aqua Crescent 2009-12-14 . chapter 20What a great ending-- very appropriate sealing-up of all the issues addressed in the story. I'm not going to pretend the SxC fangirl inside me isn't weeping (in fact, I'd say she's so distraught she's bashing her face in with an Oxford dictionary, lol) but in retrospect, this is how the story should've ended. The reader knew it as well as the characters. I'm glad you stayed true to the story with this ending instead of giving it a mushy everyone-who-earned-it-gets-what-they-want-and-they-all-live-happily-ever-after ending because TSPT wasn't ever about them all getting what they wanted--it was about them figuring out who they really were. Me, if I'd been the one to write TSPT, I would've wussed out and written Steve and Claire running away together so they could be free of Wesker and Chris' influence. I’m not even kidding. XD But at any rate, bravo, bravo! Congratulations on writing and finishing a well-written, well-paced, well-developed, in short, masterpiece fic! ACTA EST FABULA. ;) |
 Gusty bv 2009-12-07 . chapter 19I've spent the last 2 and a half days reading what you have so far. It's been a good read thus far, and I can't wait for more 83. The characters all seem so close to who they really are. And your writing style reminds me of that of the S.D. Perry novels based off the games. The inclusion of Trent from them was a nice touch XD.
Mostly I wanna see what's going to happen now that Steve and Claire have finally departed company. I look foreword to the next installment. And Kudos for sticking with the story so long, it’s been well worth reading to this point 83. |
 Xairi 2009-12-06 . chapter 19Hehe, wow.. I was skeptical at first on if I wanted to contine reading this story (since I dont really read stories with C&S as a pair), but I did and I actually like it. I started getting annoyed and then hated how Sherry became, I wasnt unfazed with Wesker at all... and I dont really know what I can say about Steve.. All I can say is, is that I'm looking forward to what happens next :) |
 The Tainted Knight 2009-11-30 . chapter 19Well that was a very interesting chapter. I still don’t really know if Steve and Claire will be together or not because love is really complicated. But if they do get together, the only way I see it happening is if a few things happen. First Claire has to learn to love Steve more than she loves Chris. Second is that at this point the only person Steve would probably listen to is Sherry because they share a deep bond (not love) due to their many similarities. Claire would need to get Sherry on her side before having any hope on getting Steve on her side. This is just a theory and it might not work but please feel free to use this theory if you need it. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
 nevrest 2009-11-23 . chapter 8Goddammit Claire and Steve! Start being nice to Wesker now! Yeesh, they're acting like a bunch of spoiled teens... |
 nevrest 2009-11-23 . chapter 7This story is awesome!
Allright, theres my superfical review opener. I can't believe how down pat you have these characters. Steve is annoyingly obnoxious, Claire has the Redfield-streak, Sherry is very logical, and Wesker...well, no words can express how badass he is in this story. Seriously, he's awesome and actually a decent guy (though probably faking to achieve his own means, but whatever). God, I just hate it when the good guys are being genuine assholes to good ol' Wesker...sigh
Well, can't wait to read the rest of this. |
 Aqua Crescent 2009-11-17 . chapter 19Dude. AWESOME! 8D The Chris and Steve showdown was spectacular, as to be expected, as was Steve's little fight with Leon and the Tyrant battle. Damn, Steve's cold now. And I loved Claire and Steve's fight in front of everyone. While I was reading it, I was thinking about what Leon, Chris, and Wesker were thinking: Wesker was most likely bored aS he most likely knew all that already, and Chris and Leon's small minds just couldn't wrap around it all, lol. But man...that seperation between Claire and Steve...that was brutal. It was so brutal and raw, I loved it. Thinking about it reminds me of Apocolyptica's "I Don't Care." Oh, and this last line: "Everything would have been better, she thought, if only Steve Burnside had just stayed dead." That's a brilliant line. It almost brought me to tears. They came so close to being together, but alas things happen--life happens--and some things change. BUT being an SxC whore, I'll keep a little bit of hope in my heart for them to reunite and find a place with each other in Chapter 20. Anyhoo, what a terrific update! I love-love-LOVED IT! And I simply can't wait for your final chapter! :) |
 The Tainted Knight 2009-11-06 . chapter 18This story is amazing! I can't tell if Steve will either join Wesker or stay with Claire. I can't wait for the next update. |
 Claire Burnside267 2009-10-09 . chapter 18ZOMG I dunno if it's the coffee, but I was on the edge of my chair while I was reading the whole chapter o_o
This is getting so heavy. OMG I'm so loving the last part with Chris and Steve. This is so much how it should be! Will Steve reveal to Chris that he slept with his sweet sister?? I'm so enjoying this XD You're making me hate the Redfields so much in your stories, you're so mean XD
I can't wait to see what will happen with the Tyrant. I can feel a bloody battle between it and Steve. Maybe this will lead to the climax of the story...
Thanks for updating! You made my day ;_;
but can we...I dunno...have a slightest happy ending? XD
(Darkside Chronices is coming out soon and you probably know about the T-Veronica virus involvement in the South America scenario...it's a shame the game isn't out yet or else you could do more connections with it in your story (like you did with Umbrella Chronicles)) |
 Nethernity 2009-10-09 . chapter 18o lol steve dun kil chris plox
updaet sun pfft
no srsly,
nid longer chapters dammit lulzie
this chapters a bit short compared to others but I enjoy'd steve's and chris' encounter.
cant wait for teh next chapter(S) |
 Aqua Crescent 2009-10-08 . chapter 18 DUDE. AWESOME, AWESOME UPDATE! :D That ending was just amazing! I loved it! Steve is so BAMF ninja! Oh, my God, my mind is swimming with possibilies with what could happen now! I noticed during Claire and Leon's reunion that Claire mirrored Steve, and during Steve's confrontation with Chris, Steve mirrored Wesker. Perhaps, since this lab is experimenting with the T-Veronica virus, Claire will become infected too and join Wesker's crew? Also was thinking about Claire was saying about Sherry and Steve aligning with Wesker, and she herself almost aligning. She seems almost free of it--except for her guilt. Perhaps Steve and Sherry can break free of it, too? But back to the fic! As I said, I LOVED how you left off this chapter! This makes me think that Chris and Steve's confrontation will determine Steve's path. Should he kill Chris, he permanently aligned himself with Wesker. Should he spare Chris, that would be a true testiment to the humanity still inside him as well as his love for Claire, even if he does align with Wesker. You're such a good writer, I can't even predict what will happen! I shall be patiently waiting for the next update--I absolutely MUST know what happens next! :) |
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