Another great fic :) I like how you got into Logan and helped the reader see as he understands what exactly he's lost. I love how confidently you write Alec and Max's relationship- I love the way you described how Alec feels about her. The way you described the look in Alec's eyes was perfect. Felt sorry for Logan (but since more than half the time I don't like him, I'm okay with that), but I thoroughly enjoyed this :)

Great story! I love it!! Especially the part where Logan was talking how they were predestined to be!!

This was a stunningly beautiful piece. I could picture Max and Alec perfectly and it made my heart melt. God I wish this would have happened in the show (eventually). I do feel the tiniest, weeniest bit sorry for Logan though - something I hardly ever feel. I especially likes the way you ended it.
Thanks

I love angsty reflective pieces like this. You did a great job of getting inside Logan's head and describing his jealosy and regret over Alec being the one to win Max. Great work!

Enjoyed the reflections of Logan in this.

This was beautifully written. I loved the angst, how you described what Logan was feeling. I'm not usually a Logan fan but you've done the character justice. Well done!

This was great! :)

"Alec lowered his lips slowly and captured Max's mouth with a gentleness he hadn't known the younger man was capable of. It was long and drawn out, sensual. He nearly groaned as their actions intensified and Alec's probing became more demanding. Catcalls and hoots of approval rang above the enthusiastic clapping of colleagues and friends."

Normally I'd find the concept of French kissing at a marraige ceremony tacky but you feel they are so in love it's sweet somehow.

I want to ofer my sincere thanks for leaving that song till the bottom of the page because I didn't like it and having it all through the story would have been profoundly irritating.

That was an excellent fic! I loved how detailed it was and how you got see how much Logan loved max. But, you got to see how madly in love Max and Alec were!

Great story. MA forever! :)

This was very touching; I never really see Logan as a victim be it because he is always so quietly arrogant, knowingly or not. But with this piece, you actually see his pain, and come as close as you can to understanding the origins of his pain. I liked that you made him admit his own faults with regard to Max as well as begrudging Alec what is rightfully his. Good work.

Never heard of the song, but it does capture Logan (or what OUGHT to have been Logan's thoughts). I like this take of the situation, because I really did believe that Logan was a good character overall.

It's a cute wedding scene with the confetti and everything. I'll let you keep all that fluff since it was a really good fic.