I've read this stories so many times.I love it! It's almost like a real CSI episode (the only differences are that the writers never put this much GSR and of course the fact that I have to read not watch it.)Anyway back to the point.Like in the beginning all of Brass's witty comments and he and Gris discussing everything. Not to mention Vartan and how Seth could make anyone fall in love with him.Also the hospital room moment when Grissom does not want to leave,just like in the CSI episodes they have those moments when he connects with the victims like in sounds of silence and gentle gentle. Honestly I think we should start a protest and get the writers to let you write an episode!

This is one of my all-time fav fics and I just realized I never reviewed it! Well, it is GREAT! LOVE it, LOVE it, LOVE it.

Any chances we could see a sequel to this one? I think it would be neat to see how Seth interacts with Sara and Gil and his sisters...great story either way.

Amazing... You're extremely good at weaving the plot bunnies in with the actual CSI plot in a way that makes it feel realistic. I could actually totally see this happening...

~IGC t DM

I really loved this story!! Especially finding out that Seth is a genuinely nice kid! I love that Gil called Sara's bluff on her timeline about her 'brother'.

Also, very happy with the GSR ending!! I would love to know how a sequel would turn out!

you should write a sequel its really really good.

ok...i am a complete sucker for ur work!

i beg for you to do a sequel...its so sweet and grissom is so adorable in this fic and seth



please do a sequel...

You have to do a seguel to this! I absolutely love it. You just can't leave me hanging here, it's to...I don't know. Just please, please make a seguel!

aw... I like seth

Completely brilliant

what a lovely story. I had to read it twice...just absolutely lovely how Seth finds her at the end. I second whoever asked for a sequel in their reveiw! :D

Great job!!

Love how the beginning is actually Saras story. =D

Very good read that. Enjoyed it immensely.

Oh my gosh, i totally love this story! perfect.

I really liked this! It was beautifully written, and interesting to read!

SEQUEL? Please, I beg you!
Loved it , your style is wonderful...you're a great author
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