Great job! Your right, you could go on forever about this story. Sometimes you just need to end it and let peoples imagination run wild.

I know I've read this before buut it is still great and jumping straight in to my C2 archive

yay. Happy ending indead! I'm glad Lyle stayed true and good. That makes me happy. Thank you for writing this story; it was very good!

I would have liked to see how the whole thing works out. I suppose since you're writing a lot of fics you want them finished to start a new one with another idea. I'm content with this.

This last part was light and a little romantic.

“And, Jar… I love you too; I should have said that a long time ago…” Wonderful story!

I loved it.

Another wonderful fic, Miss P, keep it up!

I agree to read a shorter but sooner part of this. I love Lyle is a changed man in your stories (as I mentioned before) and now he rescued both Jarod and Parker and supports Parker especially. The world is really changing.

I love Lyle's character.

Aw. I love Lyle in your story!

Lyle amazes in this story - he helped J rescue MP and now he helps rescue them from Raines! WOW! Very glad that it was only a flesh wound and that MP was able to physically demonstrate her feelings for J. Now, will Daddy be far behind with more forces to stop our trio? Very interesting events - please post again soon. Thanks

“Parker, I’m a pretender. I can do anything,” Jarod smirked.

;-p

more!

what about longer chapters?...wonder what mp is going to do next? let us know

How can you leave us hanging like that? Have you no heart? haha. You have to update very soon. I wish we could have known how the conversation between the two of them during that hour went. Amazing plot! Good Job!

what will she do now? how did Raines know where to find Jarod? I can't believe Lyle did tip him off. There will be a solution I'm sure.