ah...more..please hurry up! )

Nice work.

I really likes this story. I like most of your stories except the Amber one but this story covers an angle that has been bugging me about the end of season five and no-one else seams to have picked up on. What was Doc up to? did he want the portals open or did he want to harvest something from Buffy or Dawns death. Please write more?

Thanks

Joe

P.S. Finish up the Hellmouth Protocol please

Keep writing, I enjoyed this so far

This is really sad! :'( But good, please continue!

Nice job. Very good filling-in-the-blanks.

I really enjoyed this one! Hope there's more in the offing...

You are an awesome author.

Dude, that was awesome and !

Excellent speculation on Doc. That Xander is the one to soothe Spike's guilt is unusual, yet believable. Nice work!

Really enjoyed this, Scott. Nice interaction between X/S-everything we could hope for.

Please continue or sequel or SOMETHING! This is good, sensible,etc...

Keep this going. Like to see where it's heading. By the way, what happened to Anya in this one?

good stuff so far. love the idea of Spike and Xander helping each other instead of arguing all the time.

I want more. I like how Xander is more in charge. Send the next chapter