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| RagdollStuffy 2005-12-27 ch 1,  | abuseMe likies. Just a FYI, I have this archived :) |
| Shakia 2004-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwsome story ^^ I love the stories where Beka and Harper first meet. ^^ |
| Genii 2002-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt seems out of character for them to use that kind of profanity,But it is a good story. |
| Deanie 2002-02-28 ch 1, | abuseCute story. Very true to the characters. |
| Antares 2002-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally good! I love the "How Harper met Beka" stories! I'll read any of them whether they're long, short, good, or bad! But your was good!! |
| c 2001-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abusei can see him passing out like that, write more , it could be a series |
| Anna McLain 2001-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove your opening paragraph and the depth of detail in your setting. I could picture everything. Harper fainted...lol! Very well done. |
| Pantera 2001-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like the way you have the characters interact in this story. It's realistic, and the story's interesting and fun to read. I'm glad someone did a story about what happened when Harper and Rev met. I thought it must have been interesting. Keep up the good work. Like what did Beka mean when she said she "kinda fell in Rev's lap"? Is that another story in the offing, I hope? |
| Jelsemium 2001-06-12 ch 1, | abuseGood job. Interesting take on how Harper came aboard. Liked his reaction to Rev (the poor baby!) |
| StarKitty 2001-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice story! You got the characterizations down pretty well, too! I can just picture Harper hitting on Beka :) |
| nsane1 2001-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked that. Please, write more! |
| were-fan 2001-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! You captured the characters very well and it's an extremely plausible explanation for how they met. I look forward to reading your other stories :) |
| ~Becky~ bekybob13@aol.com 2001-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseheh.....Ok, I love the fact he was hitting on her...VERY Harperish....lol Great story. Think about doing one when they meet Trance? Juust asking..::hint hint:: :) |
| Katch 2001-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuselove this story! What an interesting take on the beginnings of the Maru crew. But where's Trance? I'd love to read a sequel in which they find her and the crew's reaction to her. But otherwise, this is great. Loved how Harper reacted to Rev too. Very real. |
| the drome 2001-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abusePretty good, could have used a bit more action, and since Harper is so scared of Magog, you should have put him screaming or something, but all in all, very good |