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noreenklose
2009-11-03 . chapter 12
Excellent story! I'm going to dive straight into the sequel. Thank you for writing it, and PLEASE continue. Your stories are very enjoyable. I'm looking forward to the next one.

KUTGW,

Noreen
monkei10
2009-10-08 . chapter 12
This story is great! i wish there was more dueling but it was great anyway! can't wait till the nxt book!
Hocapontas
2009-10-03 . chapter 3
I love how close Cedric and Orion are already. I hope Cedric will be in this story a lot.
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 12
Overall very good job. The beginning was shaky, but you really pulled through
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 11
Nice job
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 9
And the suspense builds!
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 7
Nice job
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 6
Orion should teach Neville and Hermione, Fred, and George how to be animagus. The first two because they're his friends, and the other two because they're the replacements for the Marauders.
Good job overall
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 5
It's like having a mix of canon Harry and Hermione, lol
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 4
I don't get it...Which one is going to defeat Voldamort in this, Haydon or Orion?
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 3
Nice job, the stories to the point where the beginning is okay now. As long as you have a good explanation for why he was given up than overall I'd say the stories great so far.
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 2
No one messes with Hedwig, you notice that? I wonder what Orion's animagus form is, oh well. Good job
ShineX
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
I don't know how to look at this... I've never seen a story where the Potters are a bad family, so that's new. I'll withhold my opinion until later
Wolfric
2009-09-02 . chapter 12
I enjoyed your fine story. It has enough unique features to not blend in with all the other neglected twin stories. Thanks for writing. W.
Shadowface
2009-08-07 . chapter 12
I read this forever ago...but apparently never reviewed. This one is awesome, one of the only stories where Harry goes by a name other than Harry that I like.
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