Excellent story! I'm going to dive straight into the sequel. Thank you for writing it, and PLEASE continue. Your stories are very enjoyable. I'm looking forward to the next one.

KUTGW,

Noreen

This story is great! i wish there was more dueling but it was great anyway! can't wait till the nxt book!

I love how close Cedric and Orion are already. I hope Cedric will be in this story a lot.

Overall very good job. The beginning was shaky, but you really pulled through

Nice job

And the suspense builds!

Nice job

Orion should teach Neville and Hermione, Fred, and George how to be animagus. The first two because they're his friends, and the other two because they're the replacements for the Marauders.
Good job overall

It's like having a mix of canon Harry and Hermione, lol

I don't get it...Which one is going to defeat Voldamort in this, Haydon or Orion?

Nice job, the stories to the point where the beginning is okay now. As long as you have a good explanation for why he was given up than overall I'd say the stories great so far.

No one messes with Hedwig, you notice that? I wonder what Orion's animagus form is, oh well. Good job

I don't know how to look at this... I've never seen a story where the Potters are a bad family, so that's new. I'll withhold my opinion until later

I enjoyed your fine story. It has enough unique features to not blend in with all the other neglected twin stories. Thanks for writing. W.

I read this forever ago...but apparently never reviewed. This one is awesome, one of the only stories where Harry goes by a name other than Harry that I like.