awh...that's so cute.
i like the ending. "beautiful. truly beautiful."
Very good, very well written. Please do tell me that theres a sequel that i haven't seen yet.

Aww...it was just so sweet. I absolutely love Gesea more than any other other pairing...ever.

Heh, I really loved the part when they mercilessly attack Zelos. He deserves it...

Aww~ Now that was SO kawaii! I loved it. :3
Genis... I KNEW he had the guts in him. He's a sissy in the game. He should be aggressive and assertive! Not some push over being ruled over by his sister! -Raine smacks- Owwie.
Well, I'll be looking forward to any other story you write!

Ja ne~
--Muffinizer

While I originally read the first chapter of the story back when that was all there was, I hoped for more Gesea-ness. I got that in the second chapter. I like the reference to Chobits, and I also like the "kick Zelos' ass" part at the end. Well writen, 9.4/10! (Not a perfect score because I only give those to MY stories).

:)

~Zefie Kirasagi

aww.. so sweet.. muahah.. i rock.

I think it was good. But it could be better if you developed the relationship.. It's just kind of implied right now.. But it is still a very good oneshot! :D