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| macabreXpurinsesu 2006-09-05 ch 1,  | abuseSo great. |
| Kiriana Ki 2006-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseFlora's BF's name is Helia. Not Helmia. Just telling you so you can change it. |
| xAbsolutelyEricax 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! Lol. Those poor boys... They had to have their cold showers, though, or they'd go insane... XD I never knew someone would put that in a story, but you did it perfectly. Lol. Those poor, poor boys... ^_^ This is a great oneshot, really great. Mice ending, not too original, not too exotic, just in the middle. You never find too many of those, and I wish I could be lucky enough to do that... heh. I really find it quite ironic... That was a very random comment, and I don't really know what part of the story I was talking about, oddly enough... See, if you haven't realized by now, I'm not normal. I'm as abnormal as you can get, but if I was normal, I'd be abnormal to myself. Hehe, I got off the story subject, oh-so-sorry. Well, you're a great oneshot writer, but I bet that if you wanted to, you could write one hell of a chapter story. ^_^ Well, this is getting a tad-bit long, so I'll let ya get to the other replies. Toodles! And again, a great oneshot! ~!-!~ The Flying, Crying Bunny ~!-!~ |
| LilLadyG 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE it.it was so romantic.i'll add u to my fav author list.and the story to the fav story list.Bye! |
| 4ever sweet 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abusei love it! it's really sweet, and really thoughtful. it's so great that words can't explain it |
| magenta blues 2006-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abusenice, simple, not over the top or anything. very good perspective given for both parties. i especially like how musa was humbled to see that she was the one playing 'the bad guy' now by shoving Riven away when he's trying to make amends. you've made a couple of 2D characters very human and believable. and you've got the right dose of humour that comes in at the appropriate moments. so in short, write more fics. i would like to see more of your writing style out here in fanficdom |
| purpleNova823 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was...beautiful! I loved it! Absolutely loved it! I almost cried, amazing, just amazing. ~Raver |
| Fauna Greywolf 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseabsolutley positivley wonderful. it was so riven musa fabulous. wicked awesome! |
| PhoebeTheQueenOfDragons 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseOMG I love this story I could feel all the feelings of Riven & Musa it was so heart felt if you keep going that would be the best thing in the world you know what something that would be so much better would be it you wrote a story like this of Bloom & Sky! |
| harmonicgirl09 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abusepleaze write more! it waz really good. |
| redsakura-chan 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseomg! i LOVED it! (cries out of happiness) it was BEAUTIFUL! and i was really good! I really loved this story!! and the ending it was so sweet!!and cute of course!! awesome story! it was a perfect one shot!! RIVEN AND MUSA! |
| chichicutie 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. I thouhgt it was cute. Form the idea of them working to the white roses to the smell of her hair. It was just really good. |