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| Sara and gabriella 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abusehey this is a good start u should keep going with this if u need a beta or w/e i could help beta the story 4 u...but awsome job cant wait 4 more(if u do go on with it which u should) sara |
| Number1GSRCSIfan 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abusehey the summary sound good and the prolouge was goo dso im going to keep an eye on this story see how it goes Good luck =) |
| IHeartMandM 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseSo...this was made a year ago...im interested...are you gonna finish it? |
| csi-faaaan 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseYeah, it's kinda short, but the story is GOOD! |
| Dybdahl 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm willing to give this a try, so please feel free to update |
| Linds 2006-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! I was wonderin' if you could puleze add some more chappies son! It would be great to know what happens.. Thanks!! P.S. Talented writing. :) |
| Amanda 2006-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! You really gotta update!! I need to know what's goin on and what happens! Good job so far..! |
| icklebitodd 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseo you have me hooked cant wait fo more |
| CSigurlie07 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseum... what was that? What happened? |
| Jaina Solo2 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseSara's past just isn't tragic enough? *raises eyebrow* It's kind of a slow beginning, but it has potential. *g* I would caution against the overuse of the word black however. It's great to make a point, but past that it becomes overkill. |
| red lighting 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuselove it |
| Cherrydrops12 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abusei cant wait, i love it so far!! |
| nightowl8240 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThis look promising. Update soon or I'll eat you like frosting on cake. |