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| Dyna 2007-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is only Rand & Asmodean pairing I have found. There are couple of frienship story though. Asmodean is a good character and I enjoyed his and Rand`s talks and them being together in the first place. In the books Rand has three woman loves but he in controlled by the pattern like the other ta`verens. Everything including the wiwes is chosen for them. Is totally annoying. And the woman in the books are infuriating. And who says Asmodean needs to die. What could have been if things were different, if Asmodean had stayed in Dragon`s side? |
| Dyna 2007-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThere is only few Asmodean & Rand stories witch is a shame. Keep on writing. And I dont see why the stories should end like in the books. Not completely anyway. |
| Nadreth 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseOoh - that was good...Ah damn it - I was going to stop being addicted to Slash fics...ah well - too late now. Excellent fan fic! |
| Shorelle 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's a lovely ficlet! I like the subtle, flowing feel of the writing; it portrays their relationship and mutual understanding without going overboard. ^^ Man, I'm just (pleasantly) surprised that there's finally a take on Asmodean/Rand - it would be an interesting slash pairing and I certainly picked up on little bits of their dynamic in the books. :) Hope you keep writing! |
| tsovoran 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abuseFluently written, nice characterisation! The only point I thought was a bit off was the reference to Judas. I'm hard put to think of a Wheel of Time equivalent - possibly Ishamael, the Betrayer of Hope? Liked it a lot. |