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| csimouse 2008-07-05 ch 10,  | abuseI just read this story. Thanks to crowned tiger for recommending it. You did a great job! |
| no1duranie 2006-11-25 ch 10, | abuseBrilliant piece - please write more x |
| kay 2006-10-14 ch 10, anon. | abusehi, I just read the final chapter of UFO, and I have to tell you, it was wonderful. The flirting was sweet, but the part that got to me, was when he asked her to cover him, as if it was really the first time for him. and when he said he was afraid he might hurt her because he was big well, that just made my heart melt. To read a story such as this was well woth the sighs and giggles I did. hope you write more of these stories I'll read them with great relish. |
| td 2006-07-14 ch 10, anon. | abuseVery good story. It kept me hooked and I couldn't quit reading. Can't wait to read more of your stories. |
| Dunedain Rose Thorn 2006-06-26 ch 10, | abuseawh! i loved the ending to this story! i am sorta sad its over! |
| lisab1986 2006-06-26 ch 10, | abuseWow... that was hot. I don't even know what to say, other than I'm sad it's over!! Amazing fic - I love that Griss was wearing his court suit when Sara showed up - there's just something about Griss in a suit... sorry, I got sidetracked there. I loved Sara telling Nick that she'd had her chakras realigned - that made me laugh out loud! The "'How would you feel if people found out you were dating an old guy?'" line was awesome - I think that summed up Griss' reservations perfectly! So, will there be a sequel? I can't wait to read more of your work! |
| GSRBUTTERFLY 2006-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abusehey. great story. but i thought i would tell u before u got in trouble that the last chapter just launched this into the mature rating. u might just wanna change it b4 they get mad. just warning |
| odeepblue 2006-06-26 ch 10, | abusewow, truly amazing... *speechless* i loved this, i think the way you handled everything in this story was just awesome. i love your writing, ;) odalys |
| odeepblue 2006-06-26 ch 9, | abuseyou are amazing... "she would need the cleansing", lol... thats amazing ;) |
| Sparky1943 2006-06-26 ch 10, | abuseheh heh heh very good characterizations. Great dialogue. looking forward to reading other things by you. Sparky |
| Dunedain Rose Thorn 2006-06-24 ch 8, | abusewow! these past chapters have been so awesome! i love this story! |
| jtbwriter 2006-06-24 ch 8, | abuseOh that's hot-how are they going to wait? LOL! I love how Gris is opening up and letting Sara know how much in love he is with her. He's throwing down his barriers-and I like how Sara has reassured him and not let him dwell on the past. I can hardly wait for how you have Gris and Sara come together-you really drew us in on this one! Thanks! Now what?:) |
| lisab1986 2006-06-24 ch 8, | abuseWow, two chapters all in one - this is awesome! Great work - I'm glad Sara finally told Gil about her childhood - it needed to happen eventually. I can't wait for the next update! |
| Keyrran 2006-06-24 ch 8, | abuseI've just read the eight chapters in a row and it's very frustrating to stop now! I like the "one chapter-one date" format. Their conversations are enjoyable, funny and emotional at the same time. It's a great read. Thanks for updating. |
| odeepblue 2006-06-24 ch 8, | abuse"I'm positive you will." wow, that line made my blood pressure VERY HIGH... i love this ;) |