This fic is awesome.
It's hilarious and totally IC.

This was the crasiest ** I have ever read. But then again...

Resevoir Dogs was some of the craziest sghit I've ever seen so...

kudos

Alright, so, this is pretty much amazing. The characterization is perfect, the banter is genius.

...but when candy tastes like Frankenberry that’s kind of special.

That had me in stitches. You have spun a story of pure GOLD, my friend. Brava.

KYAHH! THAT WAS... AMAZING!! I ABSOLUTELY ADORED IT!! MAKE MORE!! MAKE MORE!!

This is awesome...
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That was hilarious... good stuff... awesome dialouge... fantastic...

This was hilarious! By the way, was Mr. Brown's alias named after Herschell Gordon Lewis? Sorry, I'm a geek.

lol, that was amazing

This is hilarious.
I really like the natural dialogue you have- fits in well with the characters.

...I hope that made sense.

12:40am with an essay due tomorrow, and I'm cracking the frack up. This is hilarious, wonderful characterization. Keep writing!