Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Your writing flows like water from a mountain stream, sometimes serene, sometimes bubbling wildly around rocks, barely able to contain the beauty you portray with your words. I hate to say it (as it is a rather tired cliche) but your prose writing reads like poetry.

You say you can't write prose? This was beautiful and carried an element of your poetry within it. There were only a few words exchanged between Amidala and Annakin in this piece, but they were effective. This whole thing makes me feel all warm and gushy and dreamy inside. You use your gift of poetry with your prose very effectively. This is *really* good. *reads again* aww gosh. That was so sweet and so very romantic(love without examining it as pure lust *claps*)... *slaps her dreaming face back to the reviewing* Very lush, vivid descriptions... You write prose *and* poetry extremely well, which is pretty darn hard to do, believe me.*claps wildly* I hope this boosts your confidence in prose a bit...because you *do* write prose very well. )

Awww... cute! Short and sweet. V.nice. Keep writing mtfbwy!