Yay! I loved it!

Short but sweet; it was like peeking into another story line with just enough information to get an idea of what life is like there. I liked the repetition of the theme. However, between “She also slept too little” and “Little things, like warm water…” it seemed a little choppy. Maybe you could add something to help transition it, or maybe that’s how you wanted it to be. Also, there were a few errors, such as “maden jump” (I fear I have no idea what you meant to write in this case) and “She also slept too little”. Overall it was like reading the back of a book. You could probably take this somewhere if you wanted, but it is a cute tidbit as is.

YAY! love lee/sakura! i especially love when they have kid(s)! great job!

aw lee saku! lee just doesn't get enough respect does he?

AW!

That is so cute! I can't wait tell you update.

-Ember

I like it! Lee is an interesting character, and people don't write about his enough. There were some spelling mistakes, but that's okay. My only 'bad' comment is that is was short, but quality over quantity!