cool. inever knew the whole jinchuriki thing. beautiful story.

Hey there! I enjoyed this piece. Very interesting. Iv'e said it before (in reference to certain other forms of writing) that I love your descriptivness and your word choice. It makes all the difference in writing. Great job on this and on some of your other fics that Iv'e taken a look at.

Very well written backstory, maybe the best Diedra story i've read too.

Deidara has a demon inside him? hmm... its a good theory. I didn't know everyone in the akatsuki is more powerful than Orochimaru. thought mainly the leader and Itachi were.

Great characterization of Deidara, and I love your writing style!

cool...

HI liz umm *tear tear* it was touching... and I learned stuff anyway umm I told you I would be the first to reveiw
well I gotta go see yah tomorrow... maybe

=^..^=

I really loved your take on Deidara's history.

It's true, Deidara really doesn't have enough fan-fics about him, and I'm always happy to read any that are around- especially when they're as awesome as this.

Though, I don't see why Dei would have a Biju sealed in himself, if he was assigned to go after Gaara's Shukaku... But whatever. And of course, as you said, that made-up character you mentioned wasn't Sasori's partner... And Deidara calls Sasori 'danna'. But anyway, it was awesome nonetheless.

And I liked how, even though Deidara's past was so sad, the end of the story was happy, and Dei was finally free, and finally had friends and all. That was awesome.

I wish it was more than a one-shot, because I realy enojoyed it, and it was so well written too!

Oh well... I hope you write more stories about Deidara soon, because you portray Deidara so well! :)

Nice job. We need more fanfictions about Deidei. It's interesting, certainly. I liked the way you worked it all out. But it's "Sasori-danna" not "Sasori-dono". Somewhat different meanings.