Great story.
Loved the ending. Bonnie in a psych ward; that I gotta see!

great story, i enjoyed it much.

A really cool fanfic and very creative. 5 out of 5!

Well... what a perfectly horrible thing to happen to Bonnie for only trying to live up to her oath.

As for Kim and Ron... well, I'm sure that they are quite capable of doing a sophistic song-and-dance about how their actions were justified. However, that doesn't stop them from being theives and being the direct cause of the death of an FBI agent. Isn't that called 'murder'?

Of course, the jump from being vigilantes to becoming the very threat you tried to fight is a short one. I wouldn't be surprised if, in this universe, Kim and Ron would one day end up just as great a threat as Drakken and Shego at their worst. Just to make it uglier, I'm sure that they would still be telling themselves that it was the right thing to do and that they are heroes, not villains.

Well done on such a controversal use of the character. Far more congratulations are in order for keeping the characters more-or-less as we see in the canon. Well done indeed.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

Lol, the ending seemed a little OOC, but I still liked this. Pretty good idea. Oh yes, please rob Big Oil lol.

Pure wish-fulfillment. Oil companies taking it up the bum. Bonnie with egg on her face...and lots of it.

I liked this a lot.

Good story, nice flow. Of course, there are some obvious prejudices shown about the market system, but as a liberal arts student, the real world hasn't slapped you yet. In reality, in today's market, the transfer of funds or accounts is all done electrically. Wade would be a better, more realistic Robin Hood than a physical Kim and Ron. Good narrative and keep writing.
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Very cool, in some twisted universe this is an episode in the series. Maybe I should snatch the PDVI?
A very interesting concept, Bonnie as a close call to 'Inspector Javert' was a good one, instead of an endless dilemma though she found madness.
Great work on the chase scenes, those old PI's are wicked rides. I can't wait until the new Dodge Charger squad cars with the Hemi's in them get old enough to get bought up... that will be a booyah day!
Thanks for the great read!

Nice job. I love it. Just what would happen if Kim and Ron used their assets and gifts for robbery instead of crimefighting. I loved the ending. Kim took out Bonnie perfectly. Course if that flesh wound on Kim had ever been found out there could have been trouble. Again nice JOB!!