|Reviews for The Awakening|
| Sanna Black Slytherin 8/6/12 . chapter 22
Wow. Just... wow. This story is great. I enjoyed reading it immensely, and I'd say it was one of the funniest light!Anakin stories I've read. It was for sure the first story in which Anakin and Padmé have been frozen in carbonite for 20 years... :D
Anyway, I wish you good luck in your further writing career, since you seem to have a talent. Don't waste it.
| Master of the A.U. Fanfiction 3/22/12 . chapter 1
I just had a brainwave: What if you did a Reading of you stories The Awakening: The Original Edition and The Awakening: The Revised Edition? The Timeline can be right after AOTC. Write back soon if you think you can do or you think I should do it.
| Star Dust of Ancient Novae 2/28/11 . chapter 21
| Star Dust of Ancient Novae 2/28/11 . chapter 10
| Pooja Naberrie 11/18/10 . chapter 5
Good story so far however Brian Skywalker? Not a very cool name lol :)
| Sharnorasian Empire 3/23/10 . chapter 22
| Shinen no Hikari 11/10/09 . chapter 13
cmon you know han would have said something sarcastic like calling anakin an old man or something rather than just say his name
| Kennie Loves 'HP'TCoN'TIC 4/11/09 . chapter 22
that was really good keep writing ur great!
| Kennie Loves 'HP'TCoN'TIC 4/11/09 . chapter 15
hm vader is older than his parents in appearence...thats kinda funny, tehe, prolly only funny cuz im sleep deprived but wat ever! the story is still really good and i doubt it will stop being good.
| Kennie Loves 'HP'TCoN'TIC 4/11/09 . chapter 12
wow this is really good. and i had a question from ur other series a matter of trust/hope, is did you make up andea or was it a real george planet well thats all i guess i should keep reading if i want to finish it tonight.
| nayden4ever 2/13/09 . chapter 1
I've read 3 of your stories (A Matter of Trust, A Matter of Hope, and The Awakening) and I must say that you're such an incredible writer that I've subscribed to get alerts of any new stories from you. Your creative storylines are clever (love how you integrate actual scenes from the movies into your stories) and they contain all the elements that I look for in a great story: action, drama, humor, and of course romance. Ahh...the love scenes betwn Padme and Anakin are HOT but not too graphic/explicit enough to warrant an M or NC-17 rating. Wish George Lucas had incorporated these types of love scenes in AOTC and ROTS b/c Hayden Christensen and Natalie Portman sizzled onscreen despite what critics said. (Go NAYDEN!) I cried when Lucas killed off Padme, but I'm so glad that she and the good Anakin live on in fanfiction. :D Thank you for sharing your gift of writing awesome P/A stories. Please keep them coming! :-)
| Jedi Angel001 12/31/08 . chapter 22
I read this story are definately one of the greatest writers, I had the pleasure of reading your stories.
My favorite stories will always be the ones where Anakin never turned, and his eternal love for Padme was the key to unlock the powers of the Chosen One, thru pure unconditional Love.
| starwars rocks 8/5/08 . chapter 21
I love how baby Brian had a second chance in life. Great idea!
| starwars rocks 8/1/08 . chapter 1
I like how you changed the original movies slightly to flow with your story. Nice imagination! A few minor typos but still a great story and I enjoyed it.
| Stunna21 7/4/08 . chapter 22
great story and loved reading and when i saw the trailer for this at the end of a matter of hope i thought it would be good but it was much better than i expected it to be so this is amazing and you should be proud of it so update soon and can't wait to read what you write next.
P.S. also i read a lot of your stories already and i have to say that your one of the best star wars writers on here and just keep doing your thing so thank you for posting on here and like i said before can't wait to read what you write next and just do your own thing.