anybody with a heart would find their dance cute!! ^_^

Don't know much about Naruto but this is alright. Keep on keepin on.

able to be away from naruto...does naruto even remember benji anymore?

T_T always touching to see friends caring about each other so much they would do almost anything to help them

what more can you say other than 'kinky!'

Nice Nice. Your a great author though you should stick to only 1-4 fics since you only completed 1 out of 27 stories you made.

Okay, this one threw me for a loop! I loved how you helped Naruto out at the beginning of the story very original of you I must say. 20 ciool points for the Hiry Shoten Ha. By the way, is the character you fought one of yours or an original from the manga? Get that new chapter out man!

Btw: Good to see you in El Hazard seiries, I'm sorry to say that I haven't seen any of them except for the one were everyone goes to the other world.

See ya!

looks a bit rushed...the general idea isn't bad Benji, but looks like you compressed two or three medium-large chapters on one medium-short one...also...the POV of the relate of the history don't sounds very well...

Needs Rework.

PD:i really need to indicate the slip-up in the title?

i cant mkae heads or tails of whats going on besides naruto is in wave country.UPDATE

hello again, i see another of your lost wirter's story, i like most of them, specially this and the hazard one, but, is there anywhere i can find the reason for such travels, if they are related, or every one is a different universe? this is a good beginnin, at least i see somebody can see benji here, and mayor changes to the original timeline, cant wait for the second chapter

It's almost like Shaman King...Hey, do you think Benji can talk to Kyuubi? I mean, judging by how Kyuubi was in the show, he'd just laugh really loudly and scarily (like ** your pants crying scary) and then eject you with his chakra, somehow...but still!