i think its nice. : ] i kinda like the lacking of the detail though. > w < loved how naruto just freaked. hahaha. < 3

Hahaha so funny, the mice were watching ^_^ lol. Update soon please ^_^

:O .. ... .. ... great lol :P

lol, y athink the moce would survive a nosebleed that huge? oO

wow.thats all i have to say.

Ah, that chapter of Naruto Manga will stick in all's minds for... forever. No doubt! And so will this ;)

Love it!

~nWad

i adored it. it was so damn hot!

lol interesting

WARNING WARNING, INCOMING CRITISM!

Maybe next time you could try to characterize?

Sorry, it's just that these people in your fiction don't resemble Sasuke and Sai at all... Sasuke, you see, thinks Sai's rather disgusting, and Sai thinks Sasuke is an ** traitor **...

So how did they get together?(And don't you dare to pull a 'I love you and you love me now we're all happy' confession! :D)

Good luck with characterisation!

Lucky mice. xD Aah! Beautiful ending! [[claps]] So hapy~

[[giggles insanely]] xD Mice.

Haha. The mice saw everything. xD Good job - one of the few SaiSasu's out there. Cheers for odd pairings. :D

The smut was cute. I take that you will add depth and detail later. ^ ^

That was awesome

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG [[chokes and dies]]

This was wonderful! I love it! It was even better than our little 'conversation'! xD I was cracking up so hard! OMG It was absolutely wonderful!! You're so amazing, Suke-chan! ^_^