HOLA! ME IMAGINO, POR EL TEMA DEL FIC QUE HABLAS ESPAÑOL, PUES BIE, YO SOY DE JUAREZ, MEXICO Y ME LLAMO SONIA, SOLO QUIERO DECIRTE QUE TU FIC ME GUSTA, ESPERO Y LO CONTINUES, BUENO, SIGUE ASI, SALUDOS, ATTE. SONIA.

Wow, what a sad yet beautiful story... it almost had me crying.
I mean, wow, that's all I can say, and I'm usually not that happy about cry stories (chick-flick), but then again this really wasn't. There are a few errors though, but to err is human right, besides there wasn't enough to bother me, so keep up the good work.

I know I know, you told us in the beginning, she is dead already, but I am still hoping it will have a good ending...
My comments: about crying Ranma, I think he will try to hide that he had been crying, or cover the fact with a bad lie. And also the reaction/emotion that seeing a bloody Akane should have been much stronger, I think... but so far it's pretty good. Please continue!!

Will this story have a happy ending, or what?

Anyway, please update soon, now when I've read this I have to know how it ends ^_^.

Very interesting start. I'll go on to reading chapter 2 now.

Really good, please continue! :)

i liked it!
please continue...

Cute =) I LOVE RBD. Short and sweet. Continue, if you want. I'll read it!