wow...

so, was this based on the comics? It was really good anyway. You portrayed the story realy well and you could feel for the character.

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i liked the ending. how everyone said Bruce and Jason were so different, but in the end...they felt the same

Wow, this was an awsome fic. I love the character Jason Todd and I think you did this perfectly with Raven with him in this. It was wonderfully done.

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Wow very well. it has so much feelings in it. evry Charakter is absulutly real. it is the best Jason fan fic I have read until jet. I hope you will write more.

I love Jason Todd, no really I do. I love that he's flawed and that he tries to be good but he makes the wrong choices. This little one shot was great, I'd love to see your take on Under the Hood. I've put Jason into my Teen Titans cartoon fic as Red X...but anway, love your take on him. Wonderful.

Man, Jason really ran a gamut of emotions here, didn't he? From confident psychomania to holier-than-thou righteousness to guilt to tears. And was I the only one cheering when Jason was beating the stuffing out of Tim Drake? I'm sorry, but that boy is just too "goody too shoes" for me. Anyway, I enjoyed Raven's analysis of Jason, although she all but forced the decision upon Jason. Other than a desire to see Raven take a look at her own paternal difficulties, this was an excellent story.

Surprising that Sailor Moon lyrics really provided a great feel to this story...

You already know I've never really read a Titan comic or know anthing about Jason, but I do know a good story line. I think that you have a unique way of bringing a character that noone really likes to life. Raven's part was good and I enjoy hearing about other titans. However my prefrences is for the show. Well nice job.