Reviews for Phasing and Wings

Reviews For: Phasing and Wings

HiSaShUu 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseI love this story! It's very well written, and also I prefer Kitty&Warren than Kitty&Bobby.. Good work! ^^
FireFox ShadowWolf 2007-09-29 ch 1,	abuseaww thats so sweet
Kender-elf 2007-04-13 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh! That was so cute! That was so sweet! You know, you did a really good job w/ this fic. Seriously. I'm so smiling, and it hasn't been a very good day. I'm so glad that I turned off the tv and came to read more X-men stories and found yours. I really liked it! And, I want to suggest a sequel, but I loved the way you ended this. This is coming from an (HP) author (of fanfics) who just loves to do ...these kind of endings...like where you (try) to leave the readers smiling and thinking of the ending and stuff. So, anyways, about the sequel, I would suggest a follow up. Like, not right after, but just another one shot about Angel and Kitty, but it's up to you! Great job, again. This story is complete awesomeness! /D
Kitty2228 2006-06-08 ch 1,	abuseI loved it, you should seriously consider doing more. You write a really natural chemistry between these two characters.
Blonde Shadowcat 2006-06-06 ch 1,	abuseThat was a very well written and (might I add) quite an adorable little one-shot! I've always thought that Angel and Shadowcat looked cute together, especially when the movie came out. Great job on this!
The Reader 2006-06-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseInteresting idea. I like it. I agree with you; they hardly developed Shadowcat at all and Angel was in the movie for .5 seconds. Very frustrating.
legolasrocks987 2006-06-04 ch 1,	abuseThis was VERY well-written, and VERY good. Kitty has always been one of my favorite characters, and when I watched the movie- I also liked Angel. I never really considered them as a good pairing..until I read this fic. This was brilliant, and I hope you will make more stories with these two as a pairing..yes, I didn't really feel the KittyBobby pairing, either. I prefer Bobby to be with Rogue, anyway. Bah, I can't believe Rogue gave up her powers-! Eh, I'm babbling. Anyway, once again- this was brilliant. Just one thing though- a few times you had the word 'inching.' "She gently replied, fingers inching to touch the soft white feathers of his wings but she held back." I think you had meant 'itching,' but maybe you didn't. I think 'itching' would have been better, anyway. But otherwise, this was GREAT!
Juu-chan 2006-06-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseLove the fic. very well written! And love the wings, wish i could fly with him... sorry, getting off topic! But great fic! Really!
Falcone 2006-06-04 ch 1,	abuseWow! That was incredibly good and probably one of the best written X-3 one shots out there. Within the first few sentences you already had me trapped because everything just...bam...started. Kitty was in Warren's face and it was just wonderful. I really liked how you wrote Warren's character. Most of the Angel fanfics have written him just like this incredibly quiet guy and that's it. Here he has back-bone and spunk! Your ending, by the way, was perfect. But...I would have no objection if you decided to continue it into a longer story. >_< Maybe after the events of the third movie! So yeah, awesome.
Casakitten 2006-06-04 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. I was waiting for a fanfic to pop up for this unsual, albeit intriguing pairing. I really liked it-- would you consider writing more for the two? You've definitely proved it to be worth reading. A favorite! woot.
Gunjack 2006-06-04 ch 1, anon.	abusegreat story , well events happen a little fast buts its still very interesting to read could you continue it^^? Mfg Gunjack
mcc1089 2006-06-04 ch 1,	abusegood story. Very catchy. Probably one of the Best I've read of the X3 fics. you should write more on the pairing. I think you have a great start... why not continue?
dfghjgf 2006-06-04 ch 1,	abuseWow. I really liked this. I wish those two would have had more interaction in the movie. The movie slightly bugged me, it felt like they didn't give us enough information or character time, ya know? like they just kind of forwarded through everything, focusing a little too much on the whole Jean/Logan stuff. Oh well, we can change that in fanfiction, haha. Lovely story, I really love the pairing. It's now my favorite, lol. - Celie
miran anders 2006-06-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice! I think these two would be a nice match... you did a great job with his snarky overlay personality... and with her rather brash outgoing nature. Keep on writing... thanks - Miran

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