This was the very first Super Robot Monkey Team I read and -liked-. It's just so... monumental. And well written without losing itself in purple prose or overly verbose descriptions. The pace of the story just seemed to fit and I liked how you decided to flesh out Otto's character a bit and still kept eeryone in character.
I'm glad that I've finally gotten off my bum and signed up so I could leave you a review. I really hope you'll return sometime soon. You are a talented SRMTHG-writer and I'd love to see more from you.

awsome story i loved it really good awsome and loved this chapter really funny

Well that was super brilliant! Always wanted to know how Chiro found the monkey team and what drove him to that part of town. And how he was trained and everytihng, because in the beginning of series he can do some serious stuff already.

So of course when I saw your story I ahd to read. Even if it was fanfiction, I say you hit the backstory spot on. this could so well have been the beginning of the monkey team.

You made no msitakes that messed with the series, as far as I could see. Love the story!

WATS UP MY HOMIE C!? Srry i no i already bothred u but last time i didn't tell u how much i liked the story and mispelled anyway its awesome the best story on the entire site and i love how u stayed in charecter there r few stories that do that as well as u. My favorite chapter is ch19 because u give us another way of looking at Otto. tafnf GREAT STORY!

WOW THIS IS THE BEST STORY AN THE ENTIRE WEBSITE!XD

Awesome story! I loved how you just pieced everything. The show could actually steal this backdrop from you to use for their own,lol.jk. Again,awesome story.

antauri is gonna fight chiro!oh,no!loloz jk i read it before!

i love the story!my bro is rushing me to go to a website rpg!

I will join you in the battle for Season Five!

Or at least a Season Four Finale.

It's 12:02 a.m. I'm tired. :D

You've done, like, THE best one so far of the whole 'Hyperforce meeting' thing. Hope you continue writing!

this is so cool this story is going on my fave story list.

Ah, finally finish it! I loved it all the way to the end! It was great this was the story explianing the beginning of the monkey team. Hehe update your other stories!

I love it! It’s a great idea to as what Chiro went through before he found the monkey team, and just afterwards! I was always wondering if there was more flesh to it all than his little introduction, and this one is a good representation. And wow, you got the character’s personality’s down so well!

I can’t wait to read more from you!

Nice story! I have a feeling that if the show had gone back this far into Chiro's past, it would be exactly like this. Adding to my favorites!

hay I just read all of the 26 chapters and I loved all of your story^^ it was great and how you keeped close to the show loved it^^ and well if you do ever write a noter story give me a shout I would love to read it^^