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| MarbleGlove 2008-08-11 ch 11,  | abuseOoh. I hadn't noticed that you'd updated this year. I hope the muse comes back and you continue this some more. What is JJ planning on doing with his new future? |
| CattyNebulart 2008-07-30 ch 11, | abuseInteresting setup, good writing, don't have much else to say. I hope you'll release the Christmas episode by Christmas :) |
| homesru2006 2008-07-03 ch 11, | abuseReally good mini jack. Love to read more of this story. |
| Cadence Cascade 2008-06-10 ch 11, | abuseOh wow, a well written, nice, relatively happy MiniJack!! yaay! *goes to check out the rest of your fics* |
| the music lady 2008-05-28 ch 11, | abuseit's almost amazing how much i like this! usually if it's just miniJack i get bored pretty easily, cause if i wanted to hear about high school, i'd go myself (or really, talk to high school age friends, cause there's no freaking way i'm leaving college for that), but this is entertaining to the max! :D |
| jesusfreak1334 2008-04-09 ch 11, | abuseThis is an awesome piece! Is Sam still engaged to Pete?! I think JJ would want to know! LOL KEEP IT UP...marvelous work so far! More soon please! Oh, I've just joined in! ~J_F |
| ashadowdancer 2008-04-09 ch 11, | abuseThis has been fun reading; I look forward to more. Ya know, I have read a few SG1/Eureka crossovers with Sheriff Carter and Sam Carter listed as brother/sister. Ever thought about writing a story with JJ meeting Sheriff Carter's daughter? just a thought... I look forward to more and have you on my alert now! |
| mmkfire 2008-04-09 ch 11, | abusegood story. please finsh it. michelle |
| Nighshae 2008-04-09 ch 11, | abuseGreat story, you've done wonderfully with it so far... But I would really *love* to read more about that date he set Daniel up for, and given that he was reading a book about pyramids when JJ first met him, I'd love to see Jared and Daniel meet... Or at least Jared's reaction to finding out who JJ knows. :D |
| marislily 2008-04-09 ch 11, | abuseSo sweet! I wanna read more soon!:pout: |
| Boleyn 2008-04-09 ch 11, | abuseGreat chap, brilliant characterisations, poor Daniel trying to expalin to Jack that J.J. set him up that would be an interesting convesration, please update soon. |
| not for lack of trying 2008-03-31 ch 10, anon. | abuseway too cool to leave unfinished. please update soon. |
| remerkaba 2008-03-15 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter. I've been sitting here catching up on reading and realized I had somehow missed reading this chapter. I like your ending here better then original also. It never made sense why they wouldn't let Teal'c live off base even if he had a few adjustments to make. This story is so much fun. Any chance of an update soon? |
| Dream's Abyss 2008-03-14 ch 10, | abuseI've been looking for good stories on Jack's clone. Glad to have found another one. |
| ManicTater 2008-03-13 ch 10, | abuseI loved JJ glaring at Pete ;) And Teal'c getting to stay off base. |