Wow this ff is really good. Please tell me there is more to this story. Like wtf is up with Spencer's arms, what is gunna happen to Ashley, will she get her memory back? Very bizzare but amazing ff. PMS

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I liked reading your other story (Omniscient Dawn) on another site and was excited to see that you had written another story. I actually think I have an easier time reading this story than the other. Your writing is phenomenal with the details and description, and I think this one has more dialogue. I can picture the actions taking place and try to understand and feel what the characters are experience. What's going to happen with Ash, Madison, and what exactly is Kelly? I can't wait to read more.

this is really good kan wait untill u write more

OH MY GOD! THIS IS A GREAT STORY. YOUR VOCABULARY IS SO INTRACATE! BUT YOUR STORY IS TOO LONG; SERIOUSLY, MY EYES WHERE BURNING BY THE THIRD CHAPTER AND I WAS DYING OF THIRST. IT WAS LIKE 2:00AM AND I HAD NO IDEA WHAT I WAS POURING INTO THE CUP BUT LATER FOUND IT WAS PURE HARD LIQUOR AND I PASSED OUT WITH MY LAPTOP OPEN. WHEN I WOKE UP, I STARTED READING, THEN I WENT DOWNSTAIRS FOR BREAKFAST AND SAT DOWN. I TOLD MY MOM TO STOP YELLING AND THAT IT FELT LIKE A MILLION PEOPLE WHERE SCREAMING IN MY EAR, AND THEN SHE GOES, "WHAT DID YOU DRINK LAST NIGHT?" I JUST GOT ALL RED AND LAUGHED TO MYSELF.

I would want to off myself if I were Spencer. This fic is so dark, but I love it. PMS!

That sucks for both of them..
Madison and Spencer..
Man.. that sucks!!
Post more soon please?!?!?
Thanks.. great story.
Great way to elaborate too..
I mean.. It's not that I don't like it.. but I think you're a little too smart for me.. lol.. the words.. are like.. wow.. lol.. they're great though.

I've got to say your writing is amazing, But the only this is its to long. LOL I love. But I still dont know what happened. Yea I know is has something to do with Ashley but what did she do. an Since when Madison turned gay. ?

OMG I love this story! R u kidding me tho?? Ashley killing Kelly and her baby!? What! It doesnt make sense...Why would she do that?? Ur story is AWESOME!! PMS

finally what answer I know we've all been waiting for. lol it took me a while to read this I just kept on getting a headache. lol Soo what Im guess in that the person that was visiting Ash could it have been Madison. because all she kept on talkin about was how she couldn't be mad at her and stuff, but what ever thats what I think. and I right? lol

Wow, I'm glad that you have finally confirmed all my suspicions. I had a feeling that Kelly was dead, and that it was her grave that her and Madison were at. I fell so much better now. Great story, can't wait to see what happens next!! PMS!

dude, you're writing form is great, a 10, but i'm confused by the story, and to be honest i'd rather see some more dialogue

Are you really going to tell us what happened? Or are you just being a tease? Great story, it does take a while for me to get through the chapters, but I'm really enjoying it.

LOL I think Im going crazy, this is way to long to read in one sitting. lol its good but to long, IM just gonna read the next chapter when Im not relaxed. lol

You truly enjoy keeping everything a mystery and its driving me crazy! Good story! PMS!!