Great fic.
Nice to see a fellow Zack fan (I still can't believe what he had done though!) I always thought he was sweet yet naive, and I loved his floppy hair from S1.

In regards to this fic, I hope Whitman/Scary Man/The suspect gets his comeappeance soon & have more BB moments... it's interesting that there is no mention of outside lives yet such as any mention/appearances of Parker so I logically think Rebbecca has Parker for the time being during this "case" (I'd love to see Temperance watch and mull over a Booth/Parker bonding bit)

Keep up the FANTASTIC work!

I just read the last 23 chapters so fast i couldn't get through it quickly enough. I found it really nicely balenced with a bit from every character.I really enjoyed the way you used Angela I could hear her saying those lines.

Please Please Please write more!!.. beg

Although and i dont know if this is just me but long paragraphs are hard to keep track of shorter ones are best however this could just be me and my laptop. thanks

Sorely missed, indeed. Spend all the time you want.

Poor Zak. He's having one heck of a day.

I am really worried for that latest victim. Hopefully, he gets rescued before it's too late.

he really is gonna be missed... cool chap, update soon please


HawkAngel

This is great! It feels like a real episode. The only issue that I have is that Whitman is a serial killer, right? Booth and BBrennan have all of the information on the other bodies, but Brennan never actually examined them (at least, I don't remember her seeing the other bodies). Wouldn't she have insisted on seeing them, to form a more complete picture of the killer? It just seems like they're focusing more on the one murder than the other ones. Like I said, though, this is great- and I hope you update soon!

Some how I forgot to leave FB on this last chapter. I love the disturbing implications here. I hope you see your way clear to an update.

*shudders* poor kid...

I LOVE this story! Great job!

poor woman, and next is the kid, uh... gettin' better and better... update soon please


HawkAngel

This still remains one of the most fascinating case files on this site. Well done for keeping me interested.

Melissa

oh my... this story is huge, intense, hilarious with Angela's innuendos... I love Brennan-Booth's parts, they are just wow... wonderful story... please update soon


HawkAngel

This is a good beginning. I'm intrigued.

*shivers* creepy..

Thats one expensive dinner for an FBI agent!