 tennisgurl13 2008-09-11 . chapter 4So i was just rereading this story(which I really really love if you didn't know already lol) and I just wanted to let you know how especially great this part is:
Sara shook her head. Kimiko leant in and Sara leant forward to hear her. When she was done Kimiko walked out of the room.
“I’ll find my room now.” She said.
Sara glanced over her shoulder as Kimiko left, the whisper still echoing in her head.
“Because if you knew, you would be afraid of me.”
OMG THAT PART WAS GENIUS!!
~Tgurl~ |
 tennisgurl13 2008-05-17 . chapter 11OMG!! Now I'm hooked on another one of your stories!! This is a really intese amazing story!! Kimiko's crazy behavior kinda reminds me of this one girl, Raven in this show 'Firefly' which is really cool. I can't wait to find out what happens! Please update A.S.A.P
~Tgurl~ |
 zestychicken2 2008-04-18 . chapter 11oh wow... I feel bad for Kimiko. Poor Clay... Lol.. Wow, who knew the ring had so much power? I mean, in the beginning of this yeah they kinda SORTA explained it... but then... yeah, that just wow...
I'm really glad you updated, and I love the long chapters. Haven't seen one of those from you in a while! :) I really hope you update soon! Keep up the good work, this is very interesting!
-zesty- |
 xsmokeandmirrorsx 2008-04-17 . chapter 11o wow... This... Is...so...kewl!
i love this so much, u have to update soon!
u rule :)
xx |
 KiwiFrube-x 2007-11-12 . chapter 10haha! That was a cool chapter. So thats how she ended up with the ring... being corrupted by it?? lol well the fics going awshumly! Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep Up The Good Work and Update Soon!!
xSpRiNgYx |
 halfhuman123 2007-10-11 . chapter 9Woah... this story is SOO deep. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 zestychicken2 2007-10-07 . chapter 9Oh Kimiko. If only you hadn't done that, your life would have been so perfect. That's sorta sad... not to mention totally idiotic... But, I do like how you put Raimundo serious with his job as leader :D Yay! Okay well... This is interesting, but you are right... I can probably guess where this is going so :D Okay update soon!
♥zesty♥ |
 Xoxo Hugs and Kisses 2007-10-07 . chapter 9update ASAP! |
 KiwiFrube-x 2007-10-07 . chapter 9that was a great chapter!! i loved it ^_^ so i'm guessing that kimiko didn't forget the Black Thorn Ring and went to Chase Young to get it huh?? -sigh- what an idiot... lol well looking forward to the next update ^_^ kutgw and update soon!!
[x]...Springy...[x] |
 El 0h El 2007-09-10 . chapter 8great chapter! update soon! |
 halfhuman123 2007-09-04 . chapter 8Wait, what?
It's over? Just like that?
It was just starting to get god!
Please, continue! |
 KiwiFrube-x 2007-09-03 . chapter 8oh, oh, oh, OH MY GOD!! did Kimiko get brainwashed, left Rai, got together with Chase Young and destroy the temple and kill almost all her friends?!?!?! (all while she ws brainwashed by Chase that is). Well thats my guess done. Haven't read you're fics for a while... I'm REALLY behind on the Alls Fair in love and way series you started... I'll read them later... maybe... if i have free time ^_^. Loved the chappies that i hadn't read yet (which was quite a few) so keep up the good work so i can see if the guess was right (tho it probably wasn't) cyas!
Springy_xx |
 Xoxo Hugs and Kisses 2007-08-02 . chapter 8UPDATE SOON! |
 Elemental Warrior 2007-06-13 . chapter 8Now we're getting to the good part. Please continue and hopefully you'll update quicker, lol. Take your time. Peace! |
 zestychicken2 2007-06-12 . chapter 8good, good... I want to hear more! update soon! yes, Chase is creepy...
:D
♥zesty♥ |