I like the combination of Harry Potter and Labyrinth universe, it was a first for me. :)

lol...i like these two together

I loved this story!

Very interesting piece of dialogue between the two women. I enjoyed it a lot, especially how you can hear two stories in one go.

Excellent idea. Such a believable interaction between the two characters, along with the situations they find themselves in.
I truly enjoyed every minute of that.
Well done and thank you!
~Witch isit x

Excellent! I really enjoyed reading this...

Um.. yep. Gracias!

Brilliant Lab/HP crossover! Crossovers have a tendency to turn out quite messy, but this one worked well. Goblins have access to money, Jareth is the Goblin King... I had forgotten about his title until I read it here, where it fits so perfectly into the Potterverse! Haha, well done. :D

i liked the story but you should have twisted the relationships around, you know Hermione/Jareth and Sarah/Lucius. otherwise the story was great.

Dearest writer,
I love it. Enough said.

Luck,
Kimmi

Wow that was really interesting. I wasn't sure I was going to like it because the summary is kinda vauge but wow, excellent job well done!

This poem is really poetic justice. It's so hard to find any Laby/HP fics that have at least a shred of plausability, but this one does. And the last few lines make me jealous I didn't write it myself. Kudos to you, my friend.

::claps::
That was amazing!! It was incredibly creative, very well thought-out, and nicely written. I LOVED this.

*blink* That certainly was a twist. Interestingly done.

Excellent. The best Labyrinth/Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read, I never imagined Lucius and Hermione as a pair, but it works in a twisted way...

Loved it.

So few crossovers are any good - this makes the grade and then some.