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| pronker 2008-03-31 ch 1,  | abuseHi, here via crack_van on LJ. Marvelous work. I particularly like Anakin's "I am thy slave," harkening to his original state in life. Interesting that he wants to be one again; it says a lot about his frame of reference. |
| EllieF 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseHere from LJ. I wish you could have written all the dialogue for the movie! This is amazing, and I *know* how hard iambic pentameter is. The language is beautiful throughout. I especially like "the airless void between the stars." |
| :) 2008-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abusewow. I can't believe you actually wrote that! it was really good! & it fit the story perfectly! I'll admit, I didn't think you could pull it off, but you did! kudos to you! |
| eirene1988 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseMan, this is brilliant. Kudos to the writer. I can't stop laughing when reading this, imagining them actually saying it. So beautiful, yet silly at the same time. Superb. |
| Prieda Solo 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abuseO.K i'll admit in now, i didn't actually read all this word by word (not in the mood for shakespere or romance at the moment)but the bits i read were really good. Certainly much better than the actual script. Purely as a literature thing, you write in shakespere's style quite well, especially the sililoque from Anekin at the end (so shakespere!) And you protray the feelings and moods of the scene well too. |
| DragonRidingSorceress 2006-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really, really good! I'm not surprised. I found it on a list of Star Wars Fanfiction Awards; I figured it had to be good. .:}\DRS/{:. |
| suspensegirl 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseWow...you've got some serious talent. That was amazing. Great job! |
| Lady of Light77 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! This was wonderful! I do not think the Bard could have done it any better. Well done! Bravo! |
| Fate's Princess 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abusewow!! very nice job on this!! you're a regular Shakespeare ^_^ lol |
| skywalker05 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseLOL! That is an amazing concept. Good words in your dialogue, less incomprehensable but as compelling for its mode as Shakespeare's. :) |
| jediracer 2006-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! That's a pretty good Shakespeare imitation! I don't think I could do that...yeah, I noticed a few parts that didn't quite mesh, but overall that was excellently done! |