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| Chromde 2008-08-22 ch 13, | abuseThis story is really, really, really, good. In fact, it's so amazing I half-cried when I saw that there was no chapter fourteen. Amazing plot, simply fabulous. |
| cjloverforever 2008-08-07 ch 13, | abuseThis is a wonderful piece of fiction. Love the flashbacks; I can almost feel Nancy's heart break at Frank's betrayal. It is nice to read a fic where Frank and Nancy loose trust in each other and not Nancy/Ned or Frank/Callie. Nancy going off on her own was different, but believeable in this context. Again, it is something new and different I haven't seen before. I love the strip bar scene and Frank catching her. That you had her doing something that she would not normally be caught doing and that you used it as a tool for Frank to realize how desperate Nancy is to solve this case refects originality, but also keeps in context with who Nancy really is: a detective who will go to whatever lengths she needs to find resolution for a victim. Nice job. I'm looking forward to more. |
| dares to dream 2008-07-13 ch 13, | abusegreat story so far! I love it and hope you update again soon! +dares to dream+ |
| MissMe113 2008-06-29 ch 13, | abuseWow. All I can say is wow and GREAT JOB! Update soon! ~MissMe113 |
| rosa lunae 2008-05-22 ch 13, | abuseso I loved it, as usual. Did a brief happy dance when I got the author alert. :-) the ending of this part took me off guard almost as much as it did the characters! ;-) but not quite, I'm sure. I love that you can fit cute moments and action/suspense seamlessly! one of your many talents. :-) |
| SchoolBoredom 2008-05-22 ch 13, | abuseoh wow that was so cool! keep up the great work! cya! |
| SweetestAgony 2008-05-21 ch 13, | abuseYay, you updated! I can't wait for the next chapter, please continue! |
| SarahE7191 2008-05-21 ch 13, | abuseWow, how long has it been since you updated before? I could barely remember the story. :-p I loved the Nancy/Frank fluff! Sarah |
| Original-Red-And-Pink-4ever 2008-05-21 ch 13, | abuseWow! Please update soon! |
| Katie Todd 2008-05-11 ch 12, | abusewill there be more? Excellent! |
| SinfulAngel 2008-03-30 ch 12, anon. | abuseAll I can say for right now... is that I'm hooked. Oh, and Joe's 6-foot even, I believe. :P Not that it really matters. You're doing well, and I'll save the long review for if/when this is finished. I'm heavily hoping it will be -when-, not if. ; ; |
| Itarille Celebrindal 2008-03-22 ch 4, | abuseJust leaving a quick note since I'm not done reading the chapters yet. You note that Michelle is a first year resident, but previously referred to her as a nurse. If you're on track to be a doctor, you go to medical school for the four years and as soon as you graduate you're called "doctor" even though your training isn't complete. Then you spend one year as an "intern" and the complete the next required years as a resident with the chief resident being in their last year of post graduate training, but again, once you're out of med school, you're Dr. Suchandsuch. Just thought I'd try to help clear that up since it confused me a bit. Otherwise, like I said, I'm not done reading, but the story looks fascinating and is well written. I look forward to finishing up the chapters you have done and the ones to come. |
| SapphireMind 2008-03-03 ch 12, | abuseI am really enjoying this story. I have a story in the GI Joe area with a similar theme. Good to see I'm not the only one getting frustration out in this manner. :) Keep up the great work :) I can't wait to see another chapter! |
| mysterylovr101 2008-02-18 ch 12, | abuseOMG! I don't know if I have been reviewing this story or not but I wanted to say that it is amazing and I realy hope that you will post more in the near future! Glad to see everything is working out between Nan and Frank and I can't believe that she posed as a stripper that is something I never believed Nancy Drew was capable of. Can't wait for more! |
| Original-Red-And-Pink-4ever 2008-01-06 ch 12, | abuseI love it! Please continue! |