^ . ^ I FOUND YOU! TT . TT it took forever too! Anyways, i think this is intersante! I'll wait until the next chapter, till then! Off i go! - . -U

You have a very interesting story here. I have no idea what's going to happen. I'm not so sure about that Take guy though. Who are you looking to pair Naruto with? Anyways, you seem to have a knack for writitng, unlike most Naruto Aruthors who butcher they English language. Good luck and update again soon.

That was great, I love it, the ending was super super funny! please update soon! It was awsome!

Heehee. :D This seems pretty funny so far. The dots ... could be replaced with a comma. Just a suggestion, we all have grammar mistakes. I like how you have different things, like "Sakura hissed" instead if Sakura said hissing. I have a problem with this, and I hope to get better. Please update this soon!

F-U-N-N-Y! Update soon