This is hilarious! Ed is a little devil! And Riza (as usual) seems to be the only smart one in the group. Love it! Update soon!

Dear God, please continue this! ;_; Its awesome!! I love it! Especially toddler!Ed hitting Roy with his wooden spoon xD"
Please write another chapter ^^ it's a really nice story.

Dear Nilmiel and Kenya

Pretty cute story; very well writtened and full of creativeness. I don't watch Full Metal Alchemist, so I can't say if they are in or out of character.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

I don't approve of swearing (which this story has) it would mean a lot to me if you would remove them.
Other then that; there is nothing offensive; no sexuality, violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker

oh my god! ed in the ventalation system. lol. update please!

Whoo~! This is so cute! Heheh... update soon!

That is hysterical Roy saying "God forbid" to kids. XD Edward must have been a handful to Trisha he is gonna give Mustang hell like he has never seen in his days. I cant wait for an update.^_^

O_O What on earth?! This is gonna be worth the read big time its another one of your stories that's only chapter one and I'm on your hook,line and sinker.XD Update whenever you have the time,Nilmiel!

Hey Nil-chan! Hehehe, this is Eina from the Royai Forums...

and I absolutely adore your fic! ^_^ Do continue

See last review.

*rumble rumble rumble*
...cyoYUTE!
Ed is hiLARious! =^v^=

I LOVE IT! PLS WRITE MORE CHAPTERS OF IT!

Lol. Hilarious. Great idea, original, and not even OOC. Good job.

-Clouds of Light

P.S- Loving the wooden spoon ^_^

*falls over laughing* Please, please, PLEASE continue this! I am dying to read the next chapter, just as I am dying for the next issues of FMA manga to come out :] I've seen a lot of chibi-fied chara-fiction of other mangas/animes, but this is by far the best I've ever read! The babies are very realistic compared to what they grew up to be! And Riza...*swoons* I hate babies personally, but ek, I wouldn't mind meeting this bunch!

As long as I don't have to take care of them anyway; poor Roy...*gives him a gold star for having put up with all of this* ^_^

I was so hoping that Riza might end up falling asleep on Roy's lap or something while he's sitting on the couch, completely tuckered out after having taken care of all these children even just a day; snuggle time! >:] *has the whole scene envisioned in her head* It would have been so kawaii, perfectly reasonable, and...and...kawaii! I mean, ok, so Roy might have to die for it later on if Riza remembered what had happened and realized that he had allowed it, but just for that one moment, I'd be in heaven!

So anyway, I think you get it now that I can't wait to see the third chapter! Thanks for writing this; it really made my night. Hah, and thanks Matrin too, for turning them into babies, depsite his malicious intentions!

- Tei

It's interesting how feeding a small child can turn into an epic battle for order and cleanliness. The additional milk fiasco made this one of the funniest things I've read in a long time. It's no wonder Ed's growth is... slightly stunted, for lack of a better term ^_^. Roy's definitely creating a ton of (nonexistent but amusing) tension between himself and little Riza, which is making this all the more interesting. I love that Riza still manages to keep Roy in line when she's roughly as tall as his kneecaps... so cute! I'm looking foreward to the next chapter a lot

The uber-cuteness that is small children! Great stuff. There are a few of these kinds of fics wandering around this site, and even fewer manage to seem plausible in the context of the series. But this not only seems possible, but I can totally see this kind of thing happening. Roy, Al, and Gracia are all acting in character even during the hilarious toddler chaos. Ed is a totally believable little troublemaker... I've had to babysit for similar kids and I'm empathizing for poor Roy right now. Off to read chapter 2, yay!