The idea of Dom singing, never mind serenading, is just too damned hilarious to be believed. I laughed so much that I ended up giving myself hiccups. You just know he couldn’t carry a tune even if you gave it to him in a bucket. Poor Letty, what it is to be loved.

Love Lamb

Ah great one-shot and also very long one-shot and also i liked the fact that you showed what happened with dom and letty when they went upstaries since we dint get to see that in the movie. Oh and also lol at the end when Dom starts singing lol and then gets Letty to start singing wonder how the guys would take that lol they would be laughing their asses off if they heard dom singing lol. Well again great one-shot and i think that you should do more Dom and Letty fan fictions!! =)

excellent job!
i love how its just one scene but its amazing!

It's hard these days (at least for me) to find a Dom/Letty story--worth reading. there are a lot of decent stories out there, but too few that actually hit the character of Dom and Letty head on. I think people forget that they did have issues. And they get away from making this canon honorable to the film. So it is extremely heart warming to find one-shots that actually protray Letty and Dom the right way. So I wanted to thank you for that. Great job.
Much Love,
Santiva Potter

I just love it,gotta tell you..I love dialog part,it`s just so cute and sexy

Fan-friggin-tastic. i love this story, although the cheese-o-metre went skyhigh but i an deal with that gr8 job!!

That was really, really GOOD! Sequel?
Kia

I think you should just write Dom and Letty fics for the rest of all time! Okay, im exagerrating, but that was so frickin good, you have no idea. It's been a while since someone posted something like this. You know a one-shot, but long enough to make it worthwhile. Just one scene, played from both angles, with both of their thoughts in it. Especially when its a scene out of the timeline of the film that never got shown. And especially when you have a true grip of who the characters are, and what they'd be like alone with each other. I'm so happy you decided to share this with all of us and i thank you so much. That was one of the best reads in a while. Please write more Dom and Letty fics, and soon!
10 out of 10!
Chelle x

First off, I would like to say that there are very few Dom/Letty stories with as much detail as yours. So for that you get a round of applause! Also, you stuck to their characters very well, while at the same time putting in some possiblr hidden qualitites. Good job. So...onto my comments. :-)

it was gonna come to blows, 20 year friendship be damned. - I like it. Family over friends, way it should be.

his thoughts quickly shifted back to figuring out the easiest way to get his hands on his hot piece of ** standing in front of him. -Haha, I just like how you called her his.

Letty sauntered over to him and latched onto the front pockets on his pants. -Very Letty like.

"Hell no!" Dom all but shouted out. -Hahaha, love it.

Like the idea of him singing to her.

The last two sentences wrap it up well.

Again, very good story. I hope to see you post more soon!

Beautiful story,you have great talent:)Please write some more TFATF fics;)

I think it was great. I have never seen Letty and Dom this way. I hope you write more Fast and the Furious fanfiction.

I absolutely loved this fic. It was funny and sweet. I'm a huge Dom/Letty fan and it's nice to have a great, new writer for them. I hope u write a lot more fics, they're fun to read!
mellowyellow233

Hey, Nice job. I really, really enjoyed it. You have no idea how hard it is lately to find good Dom and Letty fics. I thought I read this before...but turns out I'm wrong. As far as I can tell you kept them both in character (which many, MANY people have trouble with doing so!) You written Dom and Letty nearly perfect and this was imaginable. All in all I have to thank you for two things: Writing a great stand alone and give me faith that people still believe in them hah! and secondly for capturing my muse! It ran away but now I have a new one. haha Thank you!

You little tease. You just had to cut it off there, didn't you?

That was great. Made me laugh. Oh my god, Dom singing? Love songs? Ew...
Totally out of character, but then again, everyone has they're little secrets don't they? I love the mention of the dog tags that Letty wears. Always made me wonder...

Great, I really enjoyed this. I'm sorry I don't have anyh constructive critism for you, but this is near perfect!